The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

Mark, Justin and Nate were going to meet Britney at the airport, since she was flying in from Boston (on a connecting flight from Canada if Mark was to be believed.)

The boy’s flight arrived first, and they were left waiting on a bench for Britney’s arrival.

“Marky!” a voice cried out from nearby.

All three boys turned towards the voice’s source. There, stood a girl working hard on a piece of gum, with bottle blonde hair, red nails, and perfect makeup. She was wearing short shorts and a tiny, low-cut crop top that showed off the fact that she wasn’t wearing a bra.

Britney ran forward and embraced Mark, saying “I’ve missed you, like, soooo much!”

Mark’s feelings were tumultuous. Deep down, he knew the hot girl hugging him was his sister, Lucy. But, he had spent so long crafting the person of Britney, even before he had decided to hypnotize Lucy; He had created a dream girl to make Justin and Nate stop asking so many questions, and maybe make them a little jealous and here she was in the flesh. On some level he couldn’t help but love his creation. Mark wondered if this was what if felt like the first time Pygmalion embraced Galatea.

Mark finally managed to get out, “I’ve missed you too.” He gave Justin an ‘I told you so’ look, and was happy to note that both Justin and Nate were speechless for a few moments taking Britney in.

“Uh, l-let’s check into our hotel,” Nate finally suggested.

The group wasted no time in going to the beach. Britney was drawing quite a few eyes in her bathing suit, and Mark loved the dirty looks he got when guys noticed him holding her hand. There was no doubt about it, Britney was a perfect 10.

“Marky, want to, like, rub some sun tan lotion on my back?” Britney said invitingly.

Mark was all too happy to oblige. Britney lay down on her front, and unhooked her bikini top so Mark could apply the lotion over her entire back. Mark felt himself getting hard as his hand touched her delicious skin, and he couldn’t help but pause and wonder if this was okay. He was quick to rationalize those thoughts away. This was his girlfriend, Britney, and they were going to have an awesome time at the beach. Besides, he was really doing Lucy a favor if you thought about it. She would still be spending her spring break at MIT with her head in a book if not for him. Looking at the vacant eyes of Britney, it was obvious there was no risk she’d be caught anywhere near something as lame as a book.

“Oh Marky, I totally forgot! I did what you told me, and used my fake ID to buy us some vodka before my flight. They didn’t even suspect I was only 18. We can all, like, do shots after we’re finished up with the beach.”

“Oh, cool. I’ll be sure to tell Justin and Nate.” Mark said. Having a 21 year old sister did come with some perks.

They spent the rest of the day enjoying themselves and when they retired back to their hotel rooms they broke out the vodka. Mark was the least experienced drinker in the group, and got sloshed pretty quick. It wasn’t long before he was making out passionately with Britney.

“Get a room you two!” Justin shouted at the amorous pair.

Mark pulled his mouth away from Britney’s honey lips, and had a moment of lucidity. Maybe he shouldn’t be going any farther.

“Maybe we shhoul’ go to hot tub!” Mark slurred out.

Britney seemed disappointed he didn’t want to take things a base or two further, but once she was over the initial disappointment was all for it. Justin and Nate were game for anything that involved seeing Britney in a bathing suit one more time, though they said something a little more tactful.

The group made their way to the hot tubs, and Mark still unsteady on his feet slurred out, “Leshz dive!”

He ran up to the hot tub and dived in head first.

Epilogue

Mark woke up in a sterile room. His mom and dad were sleeping in chairs to his left, and his sister had bags under her eyes and was sitting in the chair to his right. When he opened his eyes and looked around, his sister woke his sleeping parents.

“Like, wake up! Marky is awake.”

Now that Mark had time to take in his surroundings, he was a bit confused about why his sister had blonde hair and was dressed like a slut.

Mark’s parents stirred from their slumber, and they were quick to call in the doctors. One of the doctor’s did a variety of tests, while another one spoke with Mark.

“Mark, what’s the last thing you remember?”

Mark tried to think, but it was like part of his brain was in cobwebs, “Uh, I don’t know. I was at school, maybe?”

“What month do you think it is?”

“Uhh, January?”

“Hmm...” The doctor wrote some things down, and consulted with the other doctor.

“What’s going on?” Mark asked.

“Oh, Marky it was, like, terrible!” Lucy said. (Mark didn’t understand why she was talking like a valley girl. And where did “Marky” come from? She was normally too formal for nicknames.) “You hurt yourself diving into the pool! Justin called 911, and we rushed you straight to the hospital. I thought you were going, like, to die!”

Mark was still having a bit of trouble piecing things together.

The doctor spoke up, “You had a pretty serious concussion. You’ve been in a coma for the past 12 days. The actual date is March 29th. Given that you think it’s January, it’s very likely you’ve suffered some memory loss of at least the last few months.”

“Will I ever remember all the stuff I’ve forgotten?” Mark asked, concerned.

“Unfortunately, the kind of retrograde amnesia you suffered tends to be permanent. You may remember bits and pieces of what you’ve forgotten, but it is very likely you may never remember everything.”

“You still remember me, right Marky?” Lucy said, hugging him tightly.

Mark was touched by her concern, but thought his sister was overreacting. It looked like he had only lost a few months worth of memories, so he wasn’t likely to forget someone he had known all his life. He finally managed to say, “Of course I remember you.”

Lucy was so pleased to hear this that she kissed him right on the lips. Passionately. Mark found himself a little wierded out, but the kiss also triggered some memories.

Of course! He had hypnotized Lucy to be Britney. That’s why she was acting so strange. He just needed the trigger word to change her back.

The trigger word.

With a sinking feeling in the pit of his stomach, Mark realized that he couldn’t remember the trigger. His sister was going to be stuck as Britney. His parents were never going to realize Lucy was missing, because had made it so that they wouldn’t worry about Lucy as long as Britney was around. Mark felt guilty.

Then Britney put her tongue in Mark’s mouth, and began making out with him. Mark still felt a bit guilty, but those feelings of guilt were pushed to the back of his mind. It’s not like his sister was suffering, and who knows? Maybe he’d remember the trigger one day.