HYPNOTIC CINDERELLA (A Love Story): Part 2
By Hypnofur
Susan practically waltzed out of the limo as it dropped her back at home. She was on a cloud. Last night with David had been nothing short of magical. She couldn’t wait to see him again on Friday night.
Her romantic high came crashing down as she walked into her cold house though. She shrugged her new fur jacket around her. The place was a mess. Her eyes couldn’t help but be drawn to the stack of bills on the table. Bills that she couldn’t pay now that she was unemployed. All those old feelings of depression and hopelessness started coming back. She saw the bottle of Jim Beam on the shelf.
No. Things were different now. She didn’t have to let the sadness, thoughts of Jay, and her sorry state of affairs bring her down. She held her head high and went to her bedroom. She put on some workout clothes, and dug out her old workout DVD. It was an hour, and she could only do half of it, but she did it and she felt great.
A hot shower made her feel even better. Then she cleaned her house. It was really the first time she had cleaned since Jay left. The cleaning started to turn into a mass disposal. She started throwing away so much stuff that was from her life with Jay.
This went on for the entire week. She also hit the job search, hard. By the time Friday came, she felt like an entirely new person. David had been calling regularly, sending texts, and e-mails. He was very attentive and forthcoming with his feelings and his intentions. That was a good play. Susan needed the constant reassurance.
David kept Friday’s date a mystery. That morning, his assistant, Selia, e-mailed Susan. “I’m having something sent over! I went shopping for you this time. I took what you liked from last time and sort of made some guesses. If you don’t like it, let me know. We could make some changes!”
No sooner did Susan finish reading it than a box arrived at the door. It had a very tasteful black velvet dress, and full length mink coat with a fox collar. Brand new Victoria Secret underwear and perfume were included as well. There was a note saying that another salon appointment had been made for 1 pm, if it worked with Susan’s schedule.
Much more used to this whirlwind than she was last week, Susan laughed to herself, thinking “yeah, my schedule can make that work”.
When the limo pulled up in front of her house at six, Susan strolled out confidently in her full length fur coat, feeling every bit the hypnotic seductress that David had envisioned. She had only lost three pounds and eaten healthy for five days or so, but she felt healthier and sexier than she had in years.
She had no idea where the limo was taking her, but it didn’t really matter. She giggled with delight as they entered a small airport and she saw a private plane waiting for her. Three hours later, she sat down with David at a trendy New York restaurant. A trendy restaurant that David owned.
This time the conversation was light and fun. Two people who were generally falling for each other getting to know one another. They talked movies, music, tv shows, etc.
Susan kept an eye on her drinking, but had enough to give her a good buzz. They were laughing and giggling like teenagers.
“Tell me something about yourself that no one else knows” David said all of a sudden with a smile.
Susan slouched back in her seat. She was surprised, but liked where this was going. She desperately wanted to know him better. However, first she had to think of something to answer his question with.
“I still listen to little kid pop music stations” she said.
David rolled his eyes. “Wow. That’s hard hitting.” He mocked.
“Well let’s hear yours” she fired back, pretending to be insulted.
“I already told you the major thing about me that nobody knows.” He reminded her, alluding to the announcement of his secret fetish.
“Good point” Susan laughed. “I suppose I need to think for a minute.” She said. She tried to think of something sexy, but nothing came up. “I’ve always been very close to my older brother. I tried to lean on him when everything happened with Jay. He was so busy with his job, his kids, and stuff that he couldn’t really listen as much as l would have liked. He felt badly for me, but I wished I had more of his shoulder to cry on.” She said.
“Someone familiar to offer comfort, someone who was there before and there during…” David aptly commented. It wasn’t even really a complete sentence, or complete thought, but it was right on the money.
Susan felt herself well up a little. She was really impressed with David’s empathy. But this isn’t where she wanted the night to go. Too many of her nights had been brought down by the wake of the disaster that was Jay. She looked to lighten it up. “Yeah, we were always so close. I remember being a wall flower in junior high, while he was the popular upper classman in high school. He was a football star who was secretly a comic book geek. I used to read all his comics on Friday nights while he was out so that we’d have something to talk about during the weekend” Susan remembered fondly.
“Geez, too bad he didn’t go to my school. I was an out and out comic book geek who always prayed that some football star would take pity on me and not look down on my comic geekiness.” David lamented.
“I’m not so sure he would have been able to blow his cover!” Susan laughed. “I would have hung out with you though. I loved all those comics. In fact, that’s what got me interested in hypnosis. I’m sure you of all people know that someone is getting mind controlled in some way or another all the time in those things. I remember seeing some of the sexy villainesses controlling some of the most powerful hero guys. I was so shy at that time, I loved the idea of the big strong person being seduced into obeying the villainess will, even though she was not someone he would usually associate with. Someone he was really opposed too. I guess I fantasized about hypnotizing or controlling the popular crowd even though they were so opposed to me.” Susan laughed, idly looking at her wine while she reminisced. She glanced up at David, after he stayed silent for a moment when she expected he would have added another funny comment commiserating on high school awkwardness.
She saw he was white as a ghost, but somehow sweating. For a moment she thought he was sick or something. Oh god, did he have some kind of food allergy? He dashed her fears by forcing an attentive smile, but clearly something was up.
Ohhhhh. How could she have been so dense? Susan felt her mouth curl up in an uncontrollable wicked smile. Oh no, there would be no more ‘poor me’ talk this night. Susan’s whole demeanor instantly changed, as did the tone of her voice.
“Mmmmm. Looks like you liked that story,didn’t you David?” she practically purred. David sat still, still having that food allergy look.
“Do you like the idea of me fantasizing about being that sexy, powerful hypnotist villain?” she said, looking deep into her eyes and feeling her whole body start to tingle with excitement in anticipation of her date’s excitement.
“yes” David choked out. Such a contrast to his eloquence throughout dinner to that point.
“Yessss, I bet you did. Perhaps you too were attracted to such a villainess? Perhaps that’s what got you interested as well?”
He nodded. He thought his heart was going to beat right out of his chest.
“Give me your phone” she commanded sharply. He handed it over to her after unlocking it with his password. He watched in confusion as she giggled to herself as she pressed buttons.
“What exactly are you doing?” he asked.
“You have swept me off my feet with two extraordinary evenings David. I just figured out how I can do the same. “ Susan boasted, as she wrote down a number, then handed him back his phone. “Thanks, mine doesn’t have internet. “ she told him as she started to grab her things.
“Are you leaving?” he asked.
“Yes. Watch your phone for instructions” she said as she glanced back at him sexily.
Adrenalin shot through Susan as she bounced out of the restaurant. She was immediately on her phone. Selia had told her if she needed anything to just call. Susan took her up on that.
Selia didn’t ask where Susan was going to go with the car and driver she set her up with, but she was curious as to why she was trying to close off all roof access to David’s restaurant. However, Selia had the power to do it, so she did. It took ten or fifteen phone calls, but Selia knew how to get things done.
Meanwhile, Susan was in walking into some sort of all night costume shop. She was delighted to find there was such a thing open in a month that wasn’t October. Then again, she figured, it was New York. The college kid working at the hole in the wall store was shocked to see a sophisticated woman in a full length fur coat coming in at ten o’clock at night on a Friday all alone. She went over to a Knightbat costume and tossed it on the counter.
David was in his limo on the way back to his penthouse, as he basically didn’t know where to go or what was going to happen next. It had been about two hours since she left. Suddenly, he got a text from Susan.
“Go back to the restaurant. Everything above the fifth floor has been closed off. There is a box in the sixth floor mens room.”
Twenty minutes later, David laughed to himself as he opened the box and found the Knightbat costume. He loved where this was going, but he had to take some precautions. He texted back to Susan.
“luv where u r going w/ this, but I am kind of … famous… “
“Selia says area is secure. Is that ok 4 u?”
“ok” David typed. Selia always took care of him. Besides, he desperately wanted to see what Susan had planned.
David put on the Knightbat costume. It was snug, but it fit. He secretly admitted to himself that he felt cool in it. There was an envelope in the bottom of the box. He opened it to find a hand written note from Susan:
“Another Gothic City playboy has just disappeared. Commissioner Norman called you and claimed that he has evidence that points to Hypnotica, the evil seductress that was rumored to have somehow seized control of the criminal underground. The Commissioner has told Knightbat to come alone, and that he will give him the lead when they meet on the roof!”
Now it was David/ Knightbat who felt the adrenaline as he swung open the roof door. The cold air hit him hard, and he realized how not insulated the costume was. He shrugged the cape around himself and surveyed the roof.
“Commissioner Norman won’t be coming this evening, Knightbat” a silky voice announced from behind him. He spun around to see Susan/Hypnotica coming out of the shadows. She looked a lot warmer than him in her fur coat. David noticed the the thin, black mask she wore. He was loving this. He couldn’t help but smile.
“Is something funny, Knightbat?” she asked. Slowly walking towards him, her booted heels clicking on the roof top.
“I was just thinking how that thin little mask would do less to hide your identity than a pair of sunglasses.” He said, not quite in character yet, but not “out of character either”.
“Perhaps you’re right Knightbat. Although, sunglasses wouldn’t really be good for a dark roof top at night, would they? Besides, I like it when people can see my eyes. Can you see my eyes, Knightbat?” she purred.
David felt chills go up his spine, and it wasn’t from the cold. She was so great at this! He was actually going to live out one of his lifelong fantasies tonight.
He decided to get in character. “Where is Norman?” he said in his best impression of the Knightbat movies.
“He’s in his office, on his knees. Stroking himself as he thinks of ways to serve me.” Susan said. It was the kinkiest thing she could think of.
“Release him. It’s over Hypnotica!” David said naturally, that’s what the heroes always said.
“Is it, Knightbat?” she toyed, slowly circling him like he was pray. Dragging one gloved finger around his shoulders as she did.
“Do you believe in hypnosis, Knightbat?” Susan said, putting an emphasis on the word hypnosis.
“Are you saying you’ve hypnotized Norman?” David said, trying to remain cool, while albeit restating the obvious.
At this point she spun around him. She said nothing for a moment, just letting him take in her beauty. Letting him notice how her eyes sparkled in the light. Susan saw him take a few short, extra, breaths as he took the whole scene in.
“Yes, I hypnotized him. Tell me Knightbat, looking into my deep, sparkling eyes, do you really find that so hard to believe?” She asked, staring deep in his eyes. She noticed that there were no more giggles. They were both fully immersed in their roles. At that moment, they WERE Knightbat and Hypnotica.
“Norman’s a strong willed man” Knightbat said.
“He is indeed. But when I looked deeep into his eyes, and he let my velvety voice caress his mind, he found that he just melted into a delicious hypnotic trance.” Hypnotica immediately retorted.
Knightbat racked his brain for something witty and tough to say. It wasn’t coming, he could just feel her eyes burning into him. It was like her closeness alone was warming him on this cold Gothic City night.
Finally he managed to get down to business, “How do you do this?” Knightbat gathered the strength to look away from your eyes, “do you have some sort of hypnotic super power?” he asked.
“What makes you say that Knightbat?” she toyed.
“What makes you think I won’t grab you right now and take you to Darkham Prison?” Knightbat said toughly.
I think you’re too smart for that” She said with a wicked smile.
“Actually, I think Darkham is just the place for your type. You can trade make up tips with the Crime Clown” Knightbat said.
“Ahhh, c’mon Knightbat, think about it.. Do you really want me in Darkham? Can you imagine me, locked up with all those dangerous, but weak minded men? I’d have built an army to serve my needs in days. Who would stop me, the guards? They would be my first playthings. Besides Knightbat, if I’m locked up in there, I can’t be out here with you. I know you wouldn’t want that, would you?”
“There are other ways of dealing with your kind. Can you fly? This is a very high roof”. He said, toughening up, and glaring at her with his most menacing stare.
“Ooooh, awfully frightening, Knightbat. I know you wouldn’t do that though. I’ve researched you quite extensively, I know how you behave. More importantly though, I see you’ve discovered my eyes again. What do you say we get down to business, after all, that is what we both want ... isn’t it” she said, gazing deep.
“I’m going to fight you every step of the way” Knightbat said. He didn’t try to run though, it was like he was stepping into the ring of a prize fight. Both opponents were in their respective corners.
“I don’t think you will. Besides, there is no need to fight. Actually, I’ll let you in on a little secret. Falling into hypnosis is a lot like falling into quicksand. The more you struggle, the faster you sink. The best way to fight it is to just relax. Relax Knightbat. Just relax and try to think strategically, pay attention to what I am saying so you can counteract each suggestion. I probably shouldn’t be telling you this, but then again, I’m so confident that you’re going to just melt into my power ... I really don’t think anything can stop you from sliding into a wonderful, relaxing trance” she started.
Knightbat was trying to stay focused on fighting her. He had to keep thinking strategically. He had to listen very carefully to counteract each suggestion. He couldn’t let those fantastic sparkling eyes keep him off balance.
“Just relax Knightbat, relax and listen to me. Listen to my creamy, silky voice. Let your eyes close, let your subconscious mind fall deeply asleep and let your subconscious mind listen to me. Close your eyes Knightbat.” she commanded.
Kinghtbat closed his eyes. It felt so good to surrender. (It was a feeling he had craved his whole life)
“Knightbat, you are so deep in my hypnotic spell, so deeply asleep. It feels so wonderful Knightbat. You are warm, relaxed, and at peace. Complete bliss Knightbat. Of course there is no embarrassment or shame in being susceptible to hypnosis ... it’s so natural and helpful, really ... You know everyone I’ve talked to has found that as they listen closely to my voice, they can understand their feelings much better, just as you can now, can’t you Knightbat?”
Knightbat barely responded.
“You may speak up, Knightbat ... In fact, why don’t you open your eyes and look at me again. Look deep into my eyes, though your conscious mind is still deeply asleep....how do you feel now ... how does it feel to be so deep in hypnosis Knightbat?”
“Feels… nice ”
“Yes, but it feels better than nice, Knightbat. It feels wonderful! " She said exuberantly.
“Feels wonderful” he repeated with more emphasis.
“So deep under my control now Knightbat. You lost your fight, but it is the sweetest defeat you’ve ever known. Finally you can rest and let someone else take charge. Finally you can stop worrying about being a hero and concentrate on being a man. Men have always desired me Knightbat, I’m sure you can see why. Most men love to be dominated by my raw sexuality, my classic beauty. Do you find me beautiful Knightbat?”
“Yes”
“Mmmm, yes, I’m the most beautiful woman you have ever seen. You’d do anything to caress my creamy, soft white skin, wouldn’t you?”
Yes”, Knightbat said, breathing heavy.
“Good, very good. Would you like to kiss me Knightbat?”
“Yes”, he said, firmly.
“Yes, I’m sure you would. You’ve been alone for soo long haven’t you Knightbat? It’s been so long since you let your sexual desires and needs manifest themselves. But tonight, things change. I’ve assumed control of your mind. I’m going to harness those desires, that passion. There is nothing you can do to stop that. We both know there is nothing you want to do to stop it. Let it happen. Become so hard for me Knightbat. Become hard as a rock, hard as steel. Look at me, gaze at my beautiful breasts. I am the most sexual woman you have ever seen. I redefine your ideal woman. I am a sexual goddess. You are dying to touch me, to please me. To serve me.” Hypnotica said. Despite the biting cold, she thought she could see sweat behind his cowl.
“That’s it Knightbat, getting so hard for me now. You fall deeper under my hypnotic spell with each word I speak. As you fall deeper and deeper under my hypnotic spell, your sexual desire grows. I can bring you to levels of pleasure you have never known. I can remove all worry, all doubt, all pain and sadness. I can bring you to a place of non stop bliss. Would you like that Knightbat, would you like to go to that euphoric place with me?” you asked.
“Yes” he responded without hesitation.
“Feel that sexual passion building inside of you Knightbat. Feeling it building steam, feel your passion about ready to burst. You are about to blow Knightbat. Your desire is taking over, your lust is overtaking you.” She panted. She was feeling the same feelings as she was describing.
Susan didn’t fully grasp the level of sexual passion she had built up within David. It started to become clear to her though when he gave a low, animalistic growl and moved forward. In one forceful move, he was upon her. He hoisted her up upon him. She were actually frightened for a moment as she realized the full power of his physical prowess. He was stronger than she had given him credit for. Had she unleashed more than she could handle?
Her leather booted feet and calves were thrust to either side of his waist. His gloves grabbed her thighs and buttocks just above the rim of the thigh high nylons Selia had picked for her. Susan could feel the cool, rough leather of his costume gloves on her skin. Her breasts pressed warmly against his muscle costume chest.
Instinctively for balance, she threw her mink covered arms over his caped shoulders. This brought her head directly in line with his. Both of them completely succumbed to the heat of the moment and kissed passionately. David carried your onto a horizontal metal roof vent and laid your down on it as if it were a kitchen table.
He kissed her hard. She kissed back without hesitation. Tongues flicked forcefully against one another. David’s hands explored the contours of her soft, firm breasts. One of her delicate, gloved hands found his throbbing erection. In one move, he was able to pull down his pants so that his cock was completely exposed. That maneuver made her gasp with sexual thrill. She was glad that the costume came in two pieces.
David moaned and slid his hands up her skirt and down to her panties. She raised her hips so that he could slide them off.
David brought his hands back up, running them along her sides as he kissed her at the base of her neck and shoulder. He brought one leg up between hers, pushing it firmly against her pussy and rubbing it back and forth ever so slightly. He curled his back so his lips could find her left nipple which he had somehow exposed through her top and bra. His tongue danced around it worshipping it with as much oral attention as he could. Circling the nipple with his tongue as he lovingly played with the breast.
She gasped and sat up, attempting to flip him so he would be on his back. David let himself be pushed. She straddled him, leaning down to kiss his still cowled neck in turn. David reached up and continued his worship of her breasts. She straightened again, and then raised herself just enough to get into position over his penis. She cocked one eyebrow coyly, as if asking if he were ready. David nodded.
“There’s a condom in your utility belt” she told him. Both smiled as character was broken for the first time as he quickly rolled it onto himself.
Susan guided herself onto him, slowly lowering herself until she was impaled on the full length of his shaft. She gave an involuntary moan as she rode him. She increased the pace rapidly, each stroke sending a shockwave through her. David knew he couldn’t take much of that. He tried thrusting up when she tried to pull back and to draw away when she came down, but his breathing became increasingly ragged and he approached the point of no return.
They both came in unison, as screaming filled the rooftop. When the wonderful orgasm finally subsided, Susan collapsed on top of David. Their body heat, and the warm mink coat that now covered both intertwined bodies allowed them plenty of warmth as they basked in the afterglow.
“Thank you” David said. “That’s been my fantasy for about twenty five years.”
“Mmmm, my pleasure” Susan cooed with her head on his chest. Both knew they were falling in love as they lay on that roof top.