The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

The Sobriety Stop

This is the second story that I’ve written for mcstories. This is sort of a sequel to that story (Shared Connection), but it will make more sense with the next one I write.

“Ring…Ring.”

Elise reached for her purse laying on her passenger seat as she drove down the highway.

It was late Saturday night and Elise was driving home from a college party. It was her third year of college and she decided to rush a sorority in order to meet more people.

“Ring…Ring.”

She couldn’t find her phone, so she turned and looked into her purse and located it. She quickly looked back up at the road and noticed that she had swerved a few feet out of her lane. She turned her wheel and got back on the road as she looked to see who was calling. As she saw who was calling, a flash caught the corner of her eye and she looked at her rear-view mirror. A cop was on her tail and he had just turned on his lights. He was pulling her over. She pulled off the highway onto an old dirt road and stopped her car.

Elise looked like the proto-typical sorority girl. She had blond hair, blue eyes, perky tits, long legs, and a great ass. She loved her body and she followed an intense workout regimen to keep it in tip-top shape. She was single by choice and several of the frat-boys that she had met this semester were dying to get into her pants. She was single because she liked the attention that boys gave her and she liked being courted.

She wasn’t sure what exactly she had done, but she hoped that she could flirt her way out of it. Elise pulled out her lipstick and positioned herself so that as much cleavage was showing as possible.

The officer tapped on her window. She slowly rolled it down. He was relatively young; perhaps in his mid-30s. He was tall, with brown hair and stunning green eyes.

“Do you know why I pulled you over ma’am?” He said.

Elise played it off cool and stared deeply into his eyes as she teased her hair. “No officer. I was just trying to get home.”

“Have you been drinking tonight?” he asked as he leaned into her car to smell for alcohol.

Elise had had one drink earlier that night, but that was a few hours ago and she was completely sober. “No officer, I haven’t had anything to drink tonight.” She looked down at his badge on his chest. His last name was Johnson.

Officer Johnson leaned in a little further and grinned. “I’m gonna have to ask you to step out of the car ma’am. I suspect that you might be under the influence.”

Elise knew that the officer knew she wasn’t drunk, but she figured she’d comply and put on a show for him. She opened her door and stepped out of the car. Elise was very confident for her age, but it allowed her to pretty much always get what she wanted from boys.

She was wearing a v-cut top and an incredibly short mini-skirt that didn’t leave much to the imagination. She turned around and put her hands on the roof of her car. “Aren’t you gonna search me, officer?” She asked.

He folded him arms and sternly asked her to face him. “Ma’am, I’m going to administer a series of sobriety tests. If you fail these tests, I am going to have to arrest you. Do you understand?”

Elise smiled and shook her head ‘yes’.

“Now, little lady,” he said “The first thing I want you to do is stand on one foot and count backwards from 10 to 1.”

Elise easily completed the task and waited for the next test.

“Okay ma’am, I guess that was too easy for you.” Officer Johnson grasped one of her hands and held it firmly in his own. “Now I am going to give you a series of instructions, and I want you to follow these instructions perfectly. Do exactly as I say, when I say it. I am going to start counting down from 50 and every five counts, I want you to squeeze my hand. Look straight into my eyes as I count.”

Looking straight into his eyes wasn’t going to be a problem for Elise. Officer Johnson had remarkable green eyes. They were almost glowing. She did not find him very attractive, but she couldn’t get enough of his eyes.

Officer Johnson started his count “Remember ma’am, I want you to obey my instructions flawlessly. Just relax as I count and don’t try to think too much about the words that I’m saying.”

Elise wasn’t sure how this was testing whether or not she was drunk and she was nervous, but she knew that if she didn’t cooperate he would arrest her.

“50” Officer Johnson started his count. “49, 48, 47, 46, 45”

Elise squeezed his hand.

“Very good” he responded. “Keep following my count. I want you to make sure that you are relaxing even more with each number I say. Don’t forget to listen to my voice and do exactly as I say. 44, 43, 42, 41, 40.”

Elise squeezed his hand again. His voice was very relaxing.

“Very good.” He responded again. “You’re doing great, but you need to focus harder on my eyes. Look deeper into my eyes as I count. Take a deep breath in for me…hold it…and out. And another deep breath in…and out. Take one more deep breath and then focus all of your attention on the sound of my voice.”

Elise breathed in very deep and attempted to focus all of her attention on his voice as she stared even deeper into his eyes.

“39, continue to breathe deep, 38..37..36…35”

Elise squeezed the officer’s hand, but she noticed that her grip strength was not as strong as it had been.

“Very good” Officer Johnson once again stated. “Now continue to stare deeply into my eyes and listen to my voice. Relax as you allow my eyes to be the only thing you see and my voice to be the only sound you hear. 34…33…32…31…30”

The officer then pulled out a flashlight from his belt and shined it in Elise’s eyes as she attempted to muster up the strength to squeeze his hand. Her eyes squinted and it became harder to stare into his eyes.

“I know the flashlight makes it harder for you to focus on my eyes, but you must try to focus harder. Even if your eyes get tired, continue to focus on my eyes. And I know your eyes are tired. In fact, your whole body is exhausted. You feel like you’re falling asleep. 29…28…27…26…25” At this point, Elise was no longer able to squeeze his hand. She was no longer aware of her hands or any other part of her body. Her eyes were so heavy, but she couldn’t close them. She had to keep focusing on his majestic, green eyes.

“You no longer need to be concerned with squeezing my hand. In fact, you no longer need to be concerned with anything. Just allow your eyes to close and listen to my voice as I take you deeper and make you feel so good. Just let me do all the thinking. 24…23…22…21…20…19…18…17…16…15…14…13…12…11…10.…9.…8.…7..…6….…5….…4...…..3………2….…..…1”

Officer Johnson led Elise to her car and helped her into the driver’s seat. He commanded her to open her eyes. They were completely glazed over and there wasn’t a single trace of an independent thought in her head.

“You are in a deep trance. When I, and only I, snap my fingers and say the word ‘sleep’ you will return to this state, no matter what. You will have no choice but to return to this state and be under my complete control. Do you understand?”

“Yes” Elise mumbled.

“Good. Now when I snap my fingers, you will be alert, but you will still remain under my control. You will start your car and follow me. Do you understand?”

“Yes” Elise replied.

“Good”

Snap

Elise started her car and waited for Officer Johnson to pass her. She put her car into drive and followed him back onto the highway.

Officer Johnson pulled up in front of an apartment complex. He got out of his car and Elise got out of hers. He took Elise by the hand and led her up to his apartment. Officer Johnson led her to a comfy sofa in his living room.

“Sleep” Officer Johnson commanded as he snapped her fingers.

Elise slumped over awaiting his next command. She was incapable of doing anything other than waiting for him to place a thought in her empty mind.

“What is your name?” Officer Johnson inquired.

“My name is Elise.” She replied sleepily.

“Incorrect” he said sternly, “Your name is slave. When you are around me your name is slave. What is my name?”

“Officer Johnson” she replied.

“Incorrect again. My name is Master. From now on you will refer to me as Master. Because I am your Master. Do you understand?”

“Yes” Elise said.

“Yes what?” Officer Johnson said as he stood over her slumped body.

“Yes Master.”

Elise now understood her place. She was a slave and he was her master.

“From now on slave, you desire me and you desire to please me more than anything. Pleasing me makes you feel so good and you love to feel good. You trust me completely and you know that I know what is best for you. Every time you hear a siren or you see a police officer you will think of me and you will be so aroused. You want me so badly and you will do whatever it takes to get me. You want to fuck me everyday. You will try to fuck me everyday and if I refuse, you will go home and masturbate thinking of me. No other guy can please you, but me. You will ignore all other men. You will watch pornography every day looking for new ways to pleasure me. If you see a new sexual position, you will want to try it on me. You want my cum, it tastes so good to you. My cum tastes like honey and you must have it. Now remove your clothes for your master”

Elise stood up and stripped off her clothes. Following his voice felt so good and she knew that stripping for him felt right. She stood naked before her master because that is what he wanted. He asked her what her breast size was and she responded by telling him that she wore a size 32b bra.

“That is simply too small slave. It will be harder for you to please me with breasts like that. Tomorrow morning you will go to a plastic surgeon and get an appointment to get breast enhancement surgery. It will please me if you get enhanced to a size 32d.”

Elise nodded her head. She knew what she had to do. The slick officer stared directly into her eyes and commanded her to ‘sleep’.

Elise slumped over again and her master laid her on the sofa again.

“Alright slave, the time has come for your initiation. When I snap my fingers you will open your eyes and you will fuck me. You will orgasm over and over again until I cum, and then you will fall deeper than you have ever been and you will be mine forever.”

Snap.

Elise arose from her dreamy state and opened her eyes. Wasting little time, she moved to him and started ripping at his clothes. He helped her and before long he was completely naked as well. He handed her a condom and she pushed him to the ground with surprising force. She straddled him and started gyrating her hips back and forth, teasing him. She grabbed his handcuffs from his belt and handcuffed him to his living room table. Standing over him again, she got down on him and ran her tongue slowly up and down his penis. She slid the condom on him and then slid his cock inside of her wet cunt. She moved up and down, up and down fucking him with great enthusiasm. She was so good and so forceful that for a moment, Officer Johnson forgot who was in charge. She moaned in sweet agony as she orgasmed repeatedly. Finally her master came and she was free forever. Free from any decision-making, free to serve him as long as he wanted.

Officer Johnson commanded Elise to uncuff him. He informed her how pleased he was with her. He led her back to the sofa once again and put her into a deep trance.

“Slave, are you attracted to other women?” he asked

“No master”

“Yes you are slave. From now on you are very attracted to other women. You are attracted to them because you know that being with them pleases me. You will want to bring other women into our relationship. Do you have any attractive female friends?”

“Yes master. I’m rushing a sorority and I have made lots of good-looking friends so far this semester.”

“Excellent slave, you will tell all the girls in your sorority about me. You will tell them that I am your boyfriend and that I have the biggest cock that you have ever seen. You will bring them over to meet me one at a time, so that I may make them my slaves as well. Bringing me more slaves will please you.”

Officer Johnson picked up her purse and pulled out her digital camera. He turned it on and started cycling through the pictures. He saw many attractive young girls, but one girl in particular caught his eye. The girl was a young brunette with long brown hair, beautiful blue eyes, and a small eyebrow ring on her left eyebrow. This girl was even more beautiful than Elise and he knew he had to have her.

“Who is this” he asked pointing to the person on the screen.

“That is my older sister, master.” Elise replied.

“Where does she live?” he asked.

“She lives just a few miles away in the valley, master.”

Officer Johnson walked to his bedroom and came back with a small bag containing white powder.

“You will take this slave and plant it at your sister’s place. You will invite me over to her place so that I may discover the powder and give her a sobriety test. What is her name and how old is she?

“Her name is Erica and she is 23 master.” Elise replied

“I am very pleased slave. Tomorrow you will help me make her mine.” The officer said, “But for now I am hungry, so make me a snack.”

to be continued…