The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

The Lake, at Dawn

Synopsis: Jeff and Dawn go on a family holiday by the lake. What lurks in the lake?

“Come on” Jeff said “Get your feet off the dashboard”

Dawn sighed and endeavoured to sit properly in her seat.

The AWD churned on, diesel smoke belching out at the low gears moved the old vehicle over a hill.

And there below was Okatibbee Lake, in the Magnolia State.

Jeff parked as close to the water as he dared and Dawn leaped out to guide him as he backed closer by.

She went up to his side and leaned in the car. “Where do you think mom is?”

He parked and got out and looked back at the way they’d come. He’d not noticed how his wife and son had fallen behind. And, now…. there as no sign of her.

He didn’t know that a car coming off Center Hill Martin Rd had blocked traffic and his wife Helen and son Kent were stuck… likely to be stuck for hours, or days even.

They’d planned this trip, two vehicles. A good amount of equipment—which in another few decades would draw the name ‘glamping’. It was all done for Kent’s sake after he’d come out of hospital.

Kent was a veteran of the Vietnam War. He’d recovered from when a pal stepped on a mine and blew three people up. Kent had had skin grafts to save his legs. And then there was a lot of physiotherapy.

“We’ll set up camp” Jeff said “Have everything ready for mom and Kent”

“Okay” Dawn smiled

She went around back of the car and her dad joined her. Opening up the back they began first with the heavy tent.

“Do you think Kent will be alright, Dad?” Dawn asked

“I hope so” Jeff said as he drove in some stakes.

After a while they’d worked up a sweat.

“I’m just going for a swim” Dawn said “Do you want to come, Dad?”

“No… I’ll just rest here” he said

Dawn pulled off her T-shirt. She wore a red bikini top underneath. Jeff raised an eyebrow. His diminutive daughter was quite flat-chested. Unlike her mom.

Jeff’s own mom had been small too, so Dawn must have got those genes from him.

She grabbed a towel and wearing flip-flops she bounced down to a near-by pier. The wood creaked. As she neared the end she saw a pelican swoop in and land in the water not 30ft away from her.

It’s face dived into the water as she watched and already it caught a fish.

There were two empty rusted beer-cans near the end, and a fishing pole, broke down into two pieces.

She went to the end and placed her towel down and then looking back to see her dad still watching her she peeled off her denim shorts

She wore a red bikini bottom underneath.

At just over five feet Dawn was quite ‘petite’

She had short cut of brown hair and if she hadn’t see her there in a bikini you

thought she was a boy. The curve of her hips told you she was all woman, wrapped in a small bundle.

She checked herself out. Reaching between her legs she pulled at her bikini bottom where it was riding up into her vagina making for a ‘camel toe’. She was disgusted seeing her own dark pubes sticking out.

Oh, well… she thought… no one else was around to care.

She heard a sudden squawk. She looked up and the pelican was gone. Only some feathers floated on the water.

Dawn noticed a thick slick upon the water, kind of like a large mass blanketing about 20x10ft of lake.

She noticed a can on the jetty and she picked it up and threw it out at the slick.

The can hit the slick and did not sink, confirming in her mind that there was something other than dirty water there.

She turned to call to her dad to come take a ook but she noticed her was passed out in a camp chair.

She smiled at seeing him there. She couldn’t hear him but she bet he was snoring, fast asleep.

Dawn turned. She noticed the slick had moved. It was now very close to where she stood.

She picked up a piece of the fishing pool and grabbing hold of one of the pier supports for balance she reached out and prodded the slick

It gave a kind of gurgle as she poked at it.

The slick seemed to rotate and then moved closer to where she was.

She got down on her knees and reached out to touch it.

Suddenly the slick bubbled up over her hand, grabbing it

Dawn turned to cry to her dad when suddenly she was pulled into the water.

Dawn fell through the slick.

It covered her; embraced her body.

Five minutes later, further down the beach a naked figure emerged from the water.

Dawn strode out of the lake.

Her eyes were black as night.

She looked around at the woods, and fields. She saw a rabbit.

Her eyes zoomed in

With lightning speed she sped across the ground and caught it

She tore into it and consumed it.

Another noise caught her attention and her head spun to see

She moved towards it

She saw Jeff lying there asleep

Dawn recognised her father.

She felt a twinge between her hairless thighs.

She moved to him, sniffing his male scent as she did

As she approached, her eyes could see the patterns of heat emanating from his prone position.

She could literally see his scent as it wafted up off of him.

Dawn felt moist between her legs.

She moved to him, like a jaguar stalking its prey

Rabbit blood smeared her face. And there were splashes of it down her naked body.

She moved onto him.

Her thighs pressed against his.

“Huh? What?” Jeff gasped as he woke

“Daddy” she purred as she ran her mouth over his cheek

“Dawn?” he spluttered “What are you doing?”

“I want you” she gasped

“What?”

She sat up and grabbing the front of his shirt tore it open; buttons flying

“Dawn Marie Atkinson!” he gasped “What are you doing?”

“I need you, Daddy” she gasped as she went now for his pants

“Stop that” he said slapping her hands away

She went for his fly again

“Stop that!” he spat

He went to get up when suddenly her legs wrapped around him

“Get off me” he said as he struggled to get up with her extra weight

She pushed her vagina forward, feeling the lump inside his pants.

‘I said…” he growled as she pushed her mouth against his

“Nnn-nnnn-nhhhh” he struggled

“Love me, Daddy” she gasped

With a hand against her face he managed to pry her away so he could speak

“I said…” he tried again

“I want you so bad…”

“What’s got into you” he cried as he tried to push her off

She grabbed his wrist and with a strength that surprised him pushed his arm back over his head

“Get off me” he cried

“I need you” she gasped and she felt his response protruding against her vagina

She raised her right hand and her fingernails extended out even as he watched; becoming claws

Only now too did he noticed her eyes

She slashed at his pants, tearing at them.

Something in him; the adrenaline, and he punched her

This winded her, catching her by surprise

“Daddy?” she cried as if shocked

“Honey?” he gasped feeling instant remorse; he’d never raised his hand to his daughter before

She clutched her chest where his fist had contacted her.

Suddenly her nipples seemed to rise up, pointing. From within small white bone-like points pushed out of the ends.

He looked at her again, her mouth opened and her teeth started to fall out

“Honey?” he cried

“Fuck me, Daddy” she growled, only her voice was deeper, more guttural.

As she did more teeth pushed out of her gums; sharper… almost like shark teeth

She pushed forward and her her nipple-bones pressed into him.

“Ow” he cried

“Fuck me!” she growled

He hit her again

He managed to roll to the side—she went with him—as her legs were still locked around his torso

But now, on the ground he was on top

He managed to get out of her grip only by socking her right in the jaw.

She sprung up, hissing. From the base of her spine a small stub emerged; like the beginnings of a tail.

She grabbed his ankle. Her claws digging into his flesh

She turned and dragged him

He kicked, and screamed. He contacted her hard in the back of her leg and her bone gave an audible crack. But she continued to drag him

She dragged him down to the lake

The slick was already moving into place

He screamed, pleaded as he saw it

She had now one purpose

He was amazed now as her tail was about a foot long, swishing in the air as she walked

She dragged her father into the water and the slick moved up and embraced him. She held him under the water as it engulfed him

She smiled as she watched him consumed within its black embrace.

Some minutes later he emerged from the water

Jeff’s eyes were black as oil.

He saw his daughter there and they embraced. His tongue flicked out about ten inches, catching hers

His skin had grey scales upon it.

His cock sat in a protective sheath. His webbed-hand came down gently against her furred face.

They kissed for a moment then she turned and grabbing her ankles presented her sex to him

He pushed her fluffy tail out of the way and his cock slid up out of his sheath

He guided it into her.

She squealed as he broke her.

Her jagged teeth managed a smile as he fucked her.

* * *

In the morning Dawn woke in the tent, she lay naked with her father. They both appeared human again.

She nuzzled against him.

He woke.

“Good morning, Daddy” she beamed

“Good morning” he said

“You were amazing”

“So were you” he said and they kissed

She rolled onto him and his cock grew to meet her

She rose a little, reaching down, taking hold of his cock, she slid back down onto him

“Oh, God” she cried “This feels good”

“Not as good as when we….”

“What were we….?” she giggled

“I don’t know” he said, “Not human, anyway…”

“Do you think we can become that again, Daddy…?”

“Just shut up and fuck me…”

“Yessss” she gasped

She rode him, grasping his cock with her cunt. She trembled as she did. And then she stopped…

“When they…” she began

“And when your mom and Kent come…”

“We’ll transform them too” she gasped

“Now shut up and fuck me…”

“Yes, Daddy” she grunted….

The End