The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

Zach wandered again through the large garden, his slightly tanned skin contrasting with the almost overwhelming presence of greenery. His loose clothing billowed in the moist heat of the greenhouse which kept the flowers in full bloom. He could feel his mental energies calming, the normally tumultuous thoughts in his head slowing to a quiet stir.

“Are you enjoying yourself?” Lina called to him from further inside.

“Yes, it’s quite relaxing,” he replied. “I can feel it around me, it’s very nice.” Lina ran a very large Zen garden, filled to the brim with huge trees and exotic flowers and running fountains. She advertised group meditation and many new-age spiritual healing practices, and while her rates ran a bit high by comparison to other nearby places, most tended to agree that Lina’s garden had something extra about it that gave it a special attraction.

Lina stood and watched Zach as he closed his eyes and lifted his outstretched hands to waist level. The humid air was causing him to sweat slightly, but he continued with his exercises, a simple meditative ritual that he used nearly every time he came here. Lina was not bothered by the heat, having grown up in the tropics. Her dark skin and demure figure seemed to blend in more with her surroundings than Zach’s khaki shorts and Hawaiian shirt served.

Zach whispered quietly to himself, a short prayer and affirmation that he never allowed anyone else to hear. He turned slowly about in the stone walkway, his fingertips occasionally brushing a stray frond or leaf as he came back around to face the inside of the greenhouse again. He opened his eyes slowly and found himself in abnormally close quarters with Lina. Startled, he took a step back and nearly tripped on a raised stone in the walkway.

Lina giggled and reached to steady him, her hand resting firmly on his shoulder. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to frighten you like that.” Zach noticed that her touch felt strangely comfortable, but let the thought go. He brought his attention back to reality as he heard Lina talking again. “Hey, you’ve been coming here for a while, right?” she asked him, returning her arms to her sides.

Zach nodded, and swallowed hard to moisten his dry throat. “Yeah, it’s been nearly a year now, I think.”

“Wow, that’s a long time,” Lina responded. “Most of my clients are ‘weekend naturists,’ they tend to go back to their regular lives after only a few visits.” She glanced upward for a moment, and then, “Oh, I wanted to get your opinion on something.”

“Something, like what?” Zach asked.

“It’s a new part of the greenhouse I just got built, finally,” she explained, and started walking towards the rear of the greenhouse, gesturing for Zach to follow. “I want your opinion on the atmosphere, and the flowers.”

Zach walked with her, and came to a place he had not seen before. It was a large doorway that had been hidden from sight by a grouping of thick trees. The doorway was draped in black cloth, and when it opened, the inner hallway was likewise shrouded in black. If it weren’t for the light at the other end of the hallway, which was incidentally a black light, Zach likely would have walked straight into a wall. Lina’s hand reached to take his, and guided him through the narrow corridor as it twisted slightly towards a new room.

“You’ll forgive the lighting conditions,” Lina spoke as they entered, her dark dress making her almost invisible against the background. “It’s a nocturnal garden, so they have to be kept isolated from the rest of the plants, not to mention the sun. It took me a long time to get the conditions in here just right.”

“I’ll bet,” Zach said quietly, admiring the exotic flora. He noticed that there was a strange scent that was not unpleasant, but made him feel a little unusual. As he wandered around, peering at the different plants, a question came to his mind. “Why a nocturnal garden, though?”

Lina looked at him. “Well, some of my clients say that they are sensitive to the lighting conditions out there, and on a number of occasions, I’ve had people need to leave due to the heat. Small price to pay for the beauty of it, but that’s just my opinion. So, I designed one that was a little more suited to particular clients’ needs.”

“Makes sense,” Zach replied. One plant in particular had caught his eye. It had a strange pattern on its petals, one unlike he had ever seen before. The scent it cast was extremely pleasant and relaxing, and seemed to draw him closer to the blossom. He noticed some odd music playing, but it didn’t seem to matter, as his focus narrowed to little else but the grouping of flowers before him. He heard Lina asking him a question, and heard himself responding, but he couldn’t really make out what either one of them had said. After a few moments, he felt himself eased into a sitting position in a wide chair that seemed to have come from nowhere.

“Concentrate on my voice, Zach,” Lina said from behind the chair. Zach nodded slowly, and found himself doing so as if it were the most natural thing in the world. It seemed oddly familiar to him, as if he had done this before, but he could not put his finger on it. His mind lost its hold on the thought as Lina spoke again. “You are in a very relaxed state, and I control this state. If you want to stay feeling this relaxed and happy, you will have to do what I say.” Zach nodded again, his head drooping to one side, his eyes focused on the flowers. “Now, lean forward, and take a deep breath in through your nose, taking in as much of the flower’s aroma as you can.”

Zach tilted his body forward slowly, steadying himself against the arms of the chair. He took in a long, deep breath, and felt the scent pervade his senses. It was overwhelmingly beautiful, and made him just want to drift off and sleep, but he had been told to concentrate on the voice. “Take another breath, Zach,” she spoke again in a sultry tone, “and keep breathing in that intoxicating scent.”

Zach felt a little odd, and part of him was saying that he shouldn’t be here. He rose to leave, but couldn’t seem to find any strength in his legs. He pushed off with his arms and leaned forward, trying to at least get out of the chair, but was pulled back with a gentle hand. “You don’t want to leave yet, you haven’t seen the whole garden. It would be rude to leave an invitation such as this.” Somehow, that made sense to Zach. He didn’t want to be impolite. He sagged back into the chair and felt himself being pulled down by his own limp body.

“That’s it, Zach,” Lina coaxed. “You’re just so relaxed right now anyway, it would be a shame to abandon such a pleasant sensation. The humid air soaking into your skin, the scent of the flowers filling your lungs, their glowing petals invading your sight. You can just focus on all of that, and the sound of my voice, and let yourself drift away.”

Zach’s eyes slammed shut, and he sighed softly as he nestled his head into the back of the chair. A pair of hands began to roam across his body as he sat there, and deftly unbuttoned his shirt. Lips were suddenly pressed to his face. “Kiss me,” she whispered, and Zach obeyed automatically. She tasted the way the flowers smelled, and Zach might have found that very unusual, if he could actually concentrate on anything else at the moment.

Lina moved into his lap as the kiss deepened, and pressed her hand to his now bare chest. She slung her other arm beneath the back of his shirt and pulled him further into her passion. She broke the kiss only to whisper directions and commands into his ear, and soon he was mindlessly obeying her, kneading her breasts and pawing her thighs as she softly necked at him. The white-hot pleasure he was being rewarded with kept his mind blanked and his body completely under her control.

She slid off his lap and reached between them, her fingers pulling at his loose shorts. With a little effort, she coaxed him out of them, and was greeted with his manhood standing erect, glowing strangely in the black lighting. She hiked up the bottom of her dress and straddled him, her legs pinning him to the chair. She eased herself down, feeling his member filling her, and she moaned softly as she pressed her body to his.

“You will not come, unless I tell you to,” she whispered in his ear. “All the pleasure I bring to you will stay in your mind, and will build up there. You will stay hard for me, and you will obey me, but until I allow you to come, all the pleasure that will come to you will stay inside your mind.” Zach nodded weakly, his brain absorbing the information without question. “When you come, you will be Mine. You will finally belong to me, and you will serve me in all things, always. When I call you, you will come. When I command, you will obey. When you obey, I will give you pleasure. Pleasing Me will bring you pleasure.”

Lina paused as she watched Zach taking in her commands. When he nodded again, she slowly began rocking up and down on him, building up her own pleasure as she took him in. She whispered in his ear again, and he reached up blankly to loosen her dress straps, leaning forward to take one of her nipples in his mouth. She moaned loudly, savoring the sensations that rippled through her body as his tongue slid across her areole. She rocked faster now, eager to experience her climax, and listened with great pleasure as her prey whimpered softly with the exertion of his obedience to her will.

She whispered again, and his hips began bucking in rhythm to her own motions. She grabbed the arms of he chair to steady herself as she arched her back and drove herself harder onto him, impaling herself on his manhood. Suddenly, she cried out as her climax struck her, causing her body to shudder violently and almost lose her balance as Zach continued mindlessly pumping into her.

“St-stop, stop...” she stammered out in the wake of her orgasm. Zach became still once more, and Lina righted herself, his throbbing length still inside her. “Are you now ready to serve me?” she asked simply. Zach nodded slowly, whimpering again. “Feel the pleasure slowly pouring from your mind to your center again, and rock with me once more.”

Zach’s mind was a jumble of commands now, blanked of everything else, unable to focus on anything that might help him to escape the situation. His hips began moving again of their own accord, and he could feel the ecstacy in his mind ebbing, only to be found again locked between his legs. He moaned loudly with Lina as she wrapped her arms around him, holding his head to her chest.

“This is... your last... chance... are you... ready, Zach?” Lina asked between gasps of pleasure. Zach moaned again and nodded quickly. “Then... come now, and be Mine.”

Zach exploded into her, in what felt like an endless wave of pleasure that threatened to drown him in its depths. He felt his mind crumbling, his will replaced by Lina’s, and slowly sank into the chair. Unable to even think, he drifted into a deep slumber, where his mind remained open to Lina’s manipulations.