The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

Cloud woke up with a stretch and a yawn, blinking away the sleep to see unfamiliar bed linens. A few more blinks and it came back to her. She had spent the night at Minoko’s place. With Minoko. In her bed. Cloud couldn’t help but to smirk at that, though a little disappointed to find the bed absent Minoko herself. Must be quite the early riser.

Slipping out of the bed she could see some of her clothing from the previous night scattered on the floor. Cloud looked about the room as she picked up her shirt, taking a better look at the room now that she was less preoccupied with Minoko related…activities. She dropped her shirt back on the floor as Cloud noticed the walk-in closet Minoko had. While her own clothes from the night before would be fine Cloud was sure there would be something the vixen owned that she coil…. borrow. Walking into the closet caused Cloud’s eyebrow to rise. It certainly seemed like Minoko had quite the collection of cosplay outfits. A blue and silver ensemble that looked like Katana’s outfit from Destiny: Limited Axe Works. She even had a maid outfit tucked away in the back that looked like it could come from Mochi the Stone. Imagining Minoko wearing it as she served Cloud in every way…. Cloud’s smirk returned as she looked through the rest of the clothes.

After some pondering, Cloud finally settled on a comfy looking white and pale blue camisole v-neck, the front adorned with an anime print of some adorable looking catgirl that ended just below her upper thigh. The V quickly became a deep V, fabric pooling into the V well underneath her breasts and revealing quite the show of cleavage. She turned side to side as she admired the outfit on a full length mirror hung on the back of the closet door. The outfit might be far too big but damn if I don’t make it look good!

Giving a satisfied nod she looked about the rest of the room, noting all of the… eastern culture paraphernalia. Poster’s hung from the walls and there was a whole shelf adorned with various figures from different shows that she recognized. There was one poster from the popular anime, Mochi the Stone, with the titular Mochi wearing the maid outfit she spotted in the closet. Turning her attention to the shelf she noticed that many of the figures were actually more complex models that needed to be put together. One being a large robotic suit from the popular anime, Stationary Dress RifleSmrt: Steel Blooded Family.

Looking around further still had Cloud’s eyes drift towards a desk off to the side littered with odds and ends of a clearly mechanical nature. Cloud recognized some of the pieces as circuit boards, what looked like small lenses and microphones along other bits of less defined metal, clearly in some stage of assembly or disassembly she couldn’t say. There were a few of what Cloud could only assume were completed devices off to one side, looking complex and yet ramshackle at the same time. One of them was vaguely phone shaped? She’d have to ask Minoko later what all of that was but she didn’t find it all too surprising that the engineering student would have a few projects scattered about.

A buzz from her phone caught Cloud’s attention. Finding her phone on the nightstand she let out a sigh. It was from Vanessa. She was asking again about when she could set up a time for her to meet her new boyfriend. Cloud narrowed her eyes in thought as she stared at the screen. It just felt off, all of it. Vanessa just wasn’t the one to fall head over heels for some guy, especially not if they had hooked up for a threesome the first night they met. And the look in her eyes when she gushed about him….. It reminded her of the look Minoko had when she was tranced out and being Her good girl. The memory of last night caused Cloud to smile before a second message from Vanessa brought her back out of her steamy recollections.

That was the other thing. Vanessa was never this insistent about anything with Cloud, not even her insistence on keeping on top of her social hierarchy. She had gone on and on and on about this guy all while rubbing some sort of bracelet wristband thing she had gotten from him. It was some sort of soft plastic material in bright green with the words “Kay is the Way” printed into it.

When a third message popped in Cloud knew there would be no simply ignoring this until later, sending back a message that they could meet later tonight at their place before going out. There was no way she was going to just show up without some form of preparation though. She needed a plan to either get out of this, or take advantage of it.

She kept on going over possible scenarios in her head, pacing her way into the kitchen and finally sitting at the table lost in thought. The more she thought about it though the more she worried. If I’m right about him being able to trance people like I do….. he’s been doing this for longer than I have. I could end up just like Vanessa if I’m not careful. Going in blind would be foolish at best but she had no way to learn anything from Vanessa about the guy other than the fact he was “awesome”.

Cloud’s thoughts were interrupted by the sound of the entrance door opening and closing. Seconds later Minoko appeared, wearing another tank top that was definitely a size too small judging from the amount of cleavage on display and clearly not wearing a bra. Completing her outfit was a pair of her usual cargo pants, two cups of coffee in her hands. “Good morning Miss, I hope that it’s okay that I went out to get coffee. You get a caramel macchiato, right? I’ve overheard you ordering it from the cafe.” Minoko said, putting the cups down on the table.

“I wasn’t sure if you wanted a slice of cake as well. I can go back to get you one if you want.” The vixen finished with a fluster as she averted her gaze. Cloud took a moment to study Minoko. She remembered Minoko being shy, sure, but this level of timid was a far cry from the usual confidence Cloud had seen from her. A side effect of what I’ve done? Or a side effect of the power itself. It was an interesting shift in mindset that Cloud wanted to look into further.

She took a sip from her coffee. A small smile crossed her lips, it was exactly the way she liked it.

“That’s alright, and you got my coffee order perfect.” Cloud said, noticing Minoko glow at the praise and couldn’t help but smile at the girl. The moment was ruined by another alert from her phone. With a smile turned scowl Cloud glanced down and saw exactly what she thought she’d see: another message from Vanessa about how amazing tonight was going to be once Cloud met her new boyfriend.

“What’s wrong miss. Is it something I can help with?”

Cloud let out a sigh. Minoko must have noticed her change in mood.

“Just issues with my roommate and her new boyfriend, nothing you need to worry about.” Cloud looked back at Minoko, a look of irritation still on her face and watched as earnest expression to help on Minoko’s face deflate. Another reason for Cloud to be displeased with Vanessa. “No really Mino, it’s not a big deal. Just… I’ve noticed people wearing this bright green bracelet, just like what Van has been wearing. If you see people with one, avoid them, understand?”

Minoko’s face lit up once more upon hearing the nickname Cloud used, nodding her head up and down so fast her ears were bobbing before she realized what she was doing. She let out a small eep and pointedly started staring at her coffee as she tried to get herself under control. Cloud couldn’t help but to smile at the vixen’s enthusiastic reaction. Speaking of reactions…

It seemed time for another little test.

She set her gaze on Minoko, focusing that unnamable inner energy, drawing on it, feeling herself guide it through herself until it was channeling out her eyes once more. It’s getting easier every time. With a smile on her face she simply waited, staring at the fidgeting vixen.

Minoko was looking at her coffee, blushy flustered feelings awash inside her. She was just feeling super happy with herself today! Just very happy with life in general. I guess this is what they mean about having an afterglow after sex! She never really thought she was that into girls, but something about Cloud really swept her off her feet, it was magical, that’s the only way to describe it. I mean, I’d never do that normally, just take someone home. And…. She blushed red, and took a sip from her coffee before setting it back down.

It wasn’t just that though. She turned her gaze up from her drink back to Cloud. The girl was just really nice, sweet, and smart. Minoko felt that Cloud really got her. She could just be herself around Cloud. She blinked with a start realizing she hadn’t even put in her normal contacts, her heterochromia eyes of blue and red on full display to Cloud! She wanted to turn away but…

But she couldn’t look away from Cloud’s violet eyes. They were just so... So... She couldn’t help but stare into them. Something about her eyes. They just. She couldn’t seem to tear away from them. She knew she shouldn’t stare. But. She couldn’t just. She tried. It’s not like she didn’t try. But it felt like the more she did. The more her eyes just. Focused on Cloud’s. And the more they did. The more... They did... The more... They... The…

Cloud smiled, she saw some struggle. Minoko tried to look away. But failed in the end. Watched as the girl’s eyes took a glossy hue, widened, and became empty. “. That’s right. Keep staring. You can’t think. You just stare. Listen. And obey. That’s all you can do now. Isn’t that right?”

“Yes Miss...”

“Perfect. Now it’s time to listen again.” The test was a success, but she still had doubts. Minoko was very weak to her gaze as it was. So, she couldn’t rely on that alone. But still. The possibilities. If I can entrance someone with just a look… The book had mentioned fascination as being a powerful tool of a hypnotist. But it also said it was unreliable without firm direction. Glancing up and down at her beautiful, currently mindless fox girl and how easily she had gone under… She must have had a secret submissive streak that I’ve brought to the surface. Not that I mind it! Cloud walked over to the girl and gently rubbed the fluff of her ear, a small happy whimper was the response. Her Mino was certainly quite the cutie. She indulged herself a few seconds more of Minoko’s cuteness before returning to her seat.

Cloud glanced at her phone as she sat back down. She still hadn’t solved her problem with Vanessa and her mysterious boyfriend. Sure, this could be true love at first sight and Cloud was overthinking all of this. But with how Minoko had gone under with only a look… she wasn’t going to take chances.

Assuming this boyfriend was a hypnotist and could do the same thing that she could do, was there any way to resist it? She had read the book cover to cover. But it really only talked about harnessing and controlling the energy. It barely glossed over technique and method. For as advanced as the theories in it were, it was obviously a beginners book. To know more she’d need something more advanced. Something for me to look into later.

She sighed. Right now it’s probably like arm wrestling. Whoever was stronger and less distracted wins. But technique will play a factor as well. She needed to experiment more. She also needed more information. “You’ll forget that I pulled you down into trance just now Mino-cutie. Of course, my suggestions always sink deeper into your mind. You know you can’t resist me. You love to please me. You want to serve me. All of this feels so right. It’s what you’ve always needed, isn’t that right?“

“Yes of course Miss.” Mino had the cutest, most dreamy smile.

“Now, wake for me.”

The more her eyes focused on Cloud’s, the weaker she felt. She’d really never felt like that with anyone else before. Minoko blinked a few more times, realizing she was staring at Cloud yet again and blushed, reaching for her coffee, quickly trying to cover for her social faux paus. “Did you make your plans with Vanessa?”

“I did, the plan is to meet tonight at my place, but I don’t like it.”

“Is there something wrong with her boyfriend?”

“There’s something about him I don’t like. Everything with Van is moving too fast. It’s just not like her to be acting this way. She has perfected the art of being a social flirt and Van going so crazily devoted to just one guy? It just isn’t who she is.” Cloud again started to pace. “I just wish I could see him, just get a feel for who he is before meeting him, you know?”

“Sometimes things move fast. L-Like with us.” Minoko said, squirming a little in place. “There might be a way to see him first though.”

Like with us. Cloud thought, a small grin appearing on her lips. Yes that’s what I’m worried about. Brainwashing, conditioning. Deeper things still. Yes, that’s the worry. I don’t want to end up like Van. Or like my fox here. Cloud surprised herself with the thought. My fox… My Minoko…. She was more protective of Minoko than she thought she’d be. The fox girl was growing on her. It wasn’t just her looks that drew Cloud in, there was something more beyond the pretty face and how useful she could be. Cloud stopped her tracks. Actually care. She shook her head before looking back at Minoko. “What way is that?“

“Well Miss, I can make a small recording device, I’ve got all the parts to make one for one of my design projects. I’ve got to make a phone and it’s about learning how to make things fit together and I’m rambling. I- just- You’ll be able to see and hear what’s going on in a room. All I’d need to do is put it out of sight. As long as he’s in that one room at least. I don’t think I have enough parts to make more than one. But if he stays in the room that should be fine right?”

Cloud mulled the idea over in her mind. It would let her see and hear him…. But that wouldn’t tell her much about him. It wouldn’t tell her if he really was controlling Vanessa. She needed to find a way for him to do that, on camera. But if he already had control of Vanessa there was no guarantee he’d do anything more to her… I need to send someone there to get hypnotized.

“True, but I’d need someone for him and Vanessa to encounter.”

“I could—”

“Absolutely not.” Cloud said, cutting Minoko off. The thought of that filthy bastard getting close to Her Minoko was out of the question.

“O-Oh. S-Sorry Miss.” Minoko stammered, looking down at her feet, her tail lowering.

“Ssssssh.” Cloud said walking to Minoko, softly petting the girl’s hair and ears, “I simply don’t like the idea of putting you at risk. You’re much too important.” Minoko melted against Cloud, pushing her body up against Cloud warmly. “What we need is some sort of patsy, someone that might appeal to this guy and Vanessa, so they focus on them instead. I could easily make up some excuse for why I’m not there.” Cloud idly petted Minoko as she considered options, Minoko blissfully staying close.

Looking down at Mino Cloud couldn’t help but wonder just how much of the girl’s affection and desire to be Cloud’s was just bringing a submissive streak and an already existing attraction to Cloud to the surface or well and properly installing these desires into the vixen. She had barely resisted at all, something she doubted she could count on when she met Vanessa’s boyfriend. No, she needed to test this on someone who would at least try and struggle. And she could see just how far she could push Minoko in the process.

“An idea strikes me.” Cloud said, cupping Minoko’s cheek and guiding the vixen to her eyes once again. “Letting go now pet. Feeling so weak. Submissive. Blissful. All you want to do now is melt. To listen. To obey. Just slip off. Let your mind fall away. Stare. Listen. Obey.” Cloud spoke out in a soft, yet commanding tone. Minoko had no choice, her mind simply fell away upon the command. Once again deep within trance, her eyes wide and glossy.

Cloud didn’t want to risk her Mino with Vanessa’s boyfriend, but it also didn’t mean she wanted to accidentally tip her hand to anyone else who might be watching. This was time for another test. “Mino-pet, I have a command for you to obey, and you love obeying don’t you?”

Minoko could only reply with a helpless whimpering of affirmation.

“That’s right. When I wake you. You’ll go back to the coffee shop. Once there, you’re going to want to bring someone back here. Someone cute.” Cloud took a moment to run her hand through Miniko’s hair, enjoying the happy look of bliss in her let’s face. “They’ll be our patsy. Of course, you won’t let them know that will you Mino? No, you’ll just promise them a good time. You’ll seduce them to come back with you. Whatever it takes. Understand?”

“Yes Missss.”

“Good girl. Now, waking for me, ready to obey. Obeying as you wake now.” Waiting for Minoko to blink back into awareness Cloud smiled, “You know. A slice of cake would be nice. You’ll be a dear and bring some back, won’t you My Mino-pet?”

“Ah! Yes! Of course Miss.” Minoko said happily, springing to her feet. “I’ll be back soon.” Taking her coffee with her, Minoko left in a hurry. She needed to bring Cloud back some cake. And someone else. Someone cute. She had to do those things. It’s nice knowing what you must do. She smiled to herself as the door clicked shut behind her.

The trip to the cafe was effortless, there was a happier bounce to her step. Minoko hummed a soft tune, tail swishing behind her in time with her internal music. Get some cake, seduce a cutie and bring them home. She was going to make Cloud so proud!

The cake would be easy, but she’d never really seduced anyone before. Normally the thought of doing something like that would freak her out, but doing it now for Cloud? It sent a little shiver of excitement through her.

But…. How do I seduce someone? When Minoko thought about it more, she knew she was an alluring and desirable person. Looking down at herself brought another smile to her face. Most people with her assets like mine would have to fight off potential lovers with a stick. So why don’t they with me? She thought it over as she walked, normally she kept to herself and tried to stay out of the way of others. She’d probably had more conversations with herself when tinkering than talking with people. Typical actions of the introverted. She knew she was always introverted. She recalled some study that said 65 percent of the people in her situation and field were prone to be introverted in nature.

And if we factor in the way that I was raised by my parents… or rather that lack of being raised by them… She let out a little sigh, lost in thought as she made her way to the cafe. It was totally understandable as to why she would be more shy than most and very uncomfortable with just going out and seducing someone who’s cute. I’ve only kissed my ex before last night with Cloud! And she is so much better at kissing than he ever was! And so much more tender and caring in bed then he was too… Minoko’s mind started to drift to the events of last night as she blushed hard. God Cloud is just too hot. And I have to find someone she thinks is cute? What even is cute anyway? She might think someone was cute, but Cloud might be into another type of person. Someone like….me… Minoko blushed again and smiled at the thought.

Minoko’s smile faltered as she got to the cafe. She still had no idea if she was even qualified to determine what was cute. I keep to myself and don’t date! I don’t even know what is and isn’t fashionable! She had never really looked at people that way before, always so busy with her designs, building and crafting. Taking satisfaction when with a press of a button they would turn on and groaning if they then began to smoke and spark. She could imagine herself right now with sparks pouting from her ears as she shut down in the face of this quandary, short circuited into eternal indecision.

Minoko shook her head and lightly slapped her cheeks with both hands. No! Cloud is counting on me and I REFUSE to let her down! Taking a few deep breaths she entered the cafe. Even if I grab someone who’s not cute to Cloud, I’ll at least know what to not look for next time. Her mind made up, she began to look at the few people sitting inside.

The first person she saw at the cafe was an elf. Looks to be about 5 foot 4 so on the much shorter side for elves. Did that make them cute? Small puppies were cute. Elves are known for being attractive right? But he is short and studies showed that women are less into short guys. But was that a peer reviewed study though? Or some floozies blog? Argh I can’t remember! Not worth the risk, let’s see who else is here.

Panning her gaze around as she walked over to her usual brought a human girl to her attention. Cloud likes humans since she’s a human right? Thoughts of Cloud quickly turned into thoughts of a very Naked Cloud. Oh yes Cloud is very human.

Blinking her thoughts away from the sudden daydream, Miniko refocused on the girl who she has probably been staring at for a bit too long already. 5 foot 6. Blonde… but looks like a bit of a ditz. Definitely not good enough for Cloud. If anything Cloud prefers intellectual types like myself.

Turning her gaze to sweep the room brought a new human girl into view, tossing away some trash before starting to return to her seat. 5 foot even. Big tits though… Minoko watched as the girl’s girls bounced with each of her steps, crossing her arms across her own chest. Not as big as mine though. She is cute and I know from my shows busty short stacks do have a charm to them… yes I think Cloud would find her quite cu- Minoko’s thoughts halted as she spied a green bracelet just like the kind Cloud had described to her adorning her wrist. She narrowed her eyes, wondering if she should pick her just so Cloud could ask her questions…. But that wasn’t why she was here. I need to seduce someone cute and bring them home to Cloud. Oh, and bring her a slice of cake!

Minoko realized someone was trying to get her attention. Glancing over she could see Thomas walking towards where she was sitting, a smile on his face and a menu in his hand. His own tail swaying out from under the maid uniform of the cafe. Thomas… the maid boy… he might work. He has many of the qualities that people find attractive. Tall at 6 foot 2. His smile is nice and it looks like he works out a little. A flick of his tail caught her eye for a moment. And he’s a cat boy. Cloud definitely has a thing for floofs with how much she pet my tail and fluffed my ears and and and… Minoko snapped out of yet another daydream as Thomas cleared his throat, having made it to her table.

“Hey Minoko are you ok?” The look of genuine concern on his face decided it for her.

And he cares about others….. Yes Thomas will be perfect.

“What? Oh. Yes! I’m fine. Thank you. You know what else is fine? You.” She said, leaning forward slightly, smiling at him. “You know, I never really got a good look at you before Thomas, how long have I been coming here?”

Thomas tore his eyes away from the view down her shirt that Minoko was giving him, putting on his best smile as he turned up the charm, shifting his footing to try and give himself a nonchalant pose. Come on Thomas. Don’t fuck this up don’t fuck this up holy hell is she hot don’t fuck this up.

“A beautiful creature such as yourself?” Thomas brushed his hair back as he contemplated her question, taking the moment to try and center himself and keep from blushing. “I think you’ve been coming consistently for the past year or so. Though I must admit I may have noticed your particular charms since the first day you walked in here.” He flashed her a wink and a smile as he finished, moving himself around the table to stand closer to her.

Minoko smiled back and crooked her finger, wanting him to get a little closer. Thomas quickly took the que and bent down, bringing his face closer to hers. Minoko reached out and cupped Thomas’s chin, directing his eyes to look into hers. She really loved when she was staring into Cloud’s eyes so doing it to Thomas…. She smiled internally as she saw the boy’s tail shootout straight before going back to its swishing. Looks like he likes it too, even better for Cloud.

“Thoooomass….” Minoko purred out as seductively as she could, “When do you get off of work? Maybe you could come by my place and we can discuss beautiful creatures a bit more. In private. In my bedroom. Without clothes.” Is this how flirting works? I think this is how flirting works. Wait or is this seducing? Crap. This is so awkward…. But I need to do this for Cloud! I am doing this for Cloud! The thought that she was doing what Cloud wanted sent a little surge of happiness through her, a daze of bliss settling over her mind.

She was obeying, pleasing, serving. It was a priority to please Cloud after all. The thought of serving Cloud like last night…. She could feel her nipples stiffening, poking through her top easily. She noted in the back of her mind that Thomas must have noticed them too as his eyes warred between staring deep into hers and staring at her tits, mouth stammering as a blush crept up his face. “Mmmm….. I bet you and I could have so much fun during our discussion.”

Thomas didn’t know what to do. His flirting was good but never this good! Looking form her eyes to the cleavage on display and lower still to the tented fabric of her shirt only to tear his gaze back up only to repeat it over again. Trying to think of what to say. When Minoko shifted in her seat, shifting her tail to brush against his leg, trailing up to his crotch he lost it.

“Right now!” He exclaimed without thinking. “I can get off work right now!” Ok yes, Lindsay is going to be upset at me ditching my shift, but, this is a good excuse, right?! She’d understand. I’m just providing a bit of extra service for a regular patron, that’s all! Yeah that will totally work and even if it doesn’t…. He glanced down at her cleavage again, ... It’s going to be worth it.

Minoko couldn’t help but to let out a small, excited squeak at his earnest reaction. I have decided that I find Thomas cute. At least for myself. Oh but I’m sure now that Cloud is going to love him! Now to just bring him back… Oh right, the cake! “Before I forget cutie.” She said, scritching under his chin, still holding his gaze, “I’d love a slice of that strawberry cake. To go.“

“Right away!” Thomas leapt to his feet, quickly moving back to behind the counter to pack up the biggest slice he could find. He was moving quickly to pack up the cake, shouting into the kitchen as he worked. “Lindsay, I’m sorry, I have to leave early!”

“Everything okay?” A voice called out from the back.

“Yea! It’s slow today and something very important just came up. Something I can’t pass up. I’m really sorry for this and I swear I’ll make it up to you!”

A bit of an exasperated sigh reached his ears as he put the lid on the to go container. “Fine fine. Plus you’ve never missed a shift before, I can afford to give you an extra day off.”

“Thanks Lindsey, you’re the best boss ever!”

“Flattery will get you everywhere Thomas. Now get out of here before I change my mind!” A chuckle echoed out from the kitchen, fading from Thoma’s ears as he walked back over to Minoko.

He arrived with a flourish, winking to Minoko at the end of a little bow. “Now, shall we go? The cake is my treat.”

“Mmm, good boy.” Minoko said. Why did she say that? Something felt right about it? Her fuzzy memories couldn’t place where she’d pick up such a phrase and use it like this. But that didn’t matter. What mattered was she was serving Cloud. She stood up from the table and smiled at the boy. I mean he is being very good…. Thomas entwined his arm around her as they walked out, pressing against her as his tail kept bumping into her own. He was so close! And he’s so warm and this is actually really nice. She thought to herself, blushing a bit more. I really hope Cloud likes him as much as I do. Pleasing Cloud comes first though. That’s the priority. That’s always the priority….. Minoko’s blush deepened even further for completely different reasons as she snuggled back up against Thomas as they walked

Minoko was proud of herself. She flirted! She talked about things here and there, but mostly let Thomas ramble about his life. Seems like work at the cafe was always an adventure, and the new people needed to get better, and how he really does look good in his maid outfit, and it’s not embarrassing at all to wear it. All sorts of things about the cafe. He was worried that Lindsay might sell so that she could focus on her baking. But why not do both? “I wonder if she could sell her baking to the cafe if she does sell.” Minoko asked when she could get a word in. The answer never did come however as they arrived. “Ah, here we are, come on in.”

When the pair entered they were greeted by Cloud, who had changed her clothes to a pair of tight black yoga pants and a tight, low cut blue crop top to match. She must have gone home to change, none of my tops would fit that… flatteringly on her. Minoko eyes wandered the curves of Cloud’s body before snapping back to attention when Cloud began to speak.

“Mino dear, welcome home. Did you pick up what I asked for?”

Closing the door Minoko nodded and took off her shoes, “Yes Miss, I think so, hopefully things meet up to your standards.”

“Hmmm, perhaps.” Cloud said, looking Thomas up and down. “The maid outfit is a plus.” Her eyes locked onto the cat boy’s, once more drawing that ephemeral power to her eyes as she focused on her gaze.

“I’m sorry, what’s going on?” Thomas asked, looking first to Minoko, then to Cloud. Then to Cloud’s eyes. Woah what’s with her eyes…. It’s like they’re glowing…. and there’s just so much detail so much to see in her eyes….. There was something about them. Magnetic? He couldn’t explain it, he just had to keep staring into them. Fuck and I thought it was hot when Minoko looked me in the eyes… oh shit right Minoko! Thomas blinked and blushed, arousal coursing through him as he remembered Minoko’s sultry gaze at the cafe. He looked away and back to Minoko, unsure now of what exactly was going on, shifting his legs as his erection began to tent the fabric of the maid uniform. “Did you bring me in for a three way? I’m not objecting, but I just never thought—” He was interrupted by a loud snap of Cloud’s fingers.

“Into my eyes now.” Cloud commanded. So it wasn’t an all powerful sort of thing. Thomas seemed to be able to look away easily enough. This must be that direction the book implied. Getting someone’s attention is easy but easily lost. But if the book is to be believed…she just needed to provide orders for their minds to focus on “Stare into my eyes. Focus on me.“

At that snap. Thomas’ body seemed to, well, snap to attention for a moment, everything going rigid. Even his tail shot up, and his gaze locked back onto Cloud’s. Cloud smiled approvingly as she noted the other part of Thomas that was now very clearly rigid as well. Minoko picked a good one, I’ll have to reward My good girl later. Before she could dwell on those thoughts Thomas spoke out, confused and befuddled. “I- what? You…. What do you mean? What are you saying?“

She snapped again. Cloud noticed Minoko had the same reaction as Thomas, perhaps an even stronger one from how glazed over her eyes already looked. “Focus on my eyes, don’t look away. You can’t look away. You’re being pulled into them. It’s like my eyes are like a black hole. They suck you in. They draw you in, and you can’t escape. You’re simply pulled into my gaze, pulled in even deeper. As that happens your mind becomes blank. More vacant. More empty. Harder to think now. Stare deeper for me.”

Both Thomas and Minoko were staring ahead, at attention, but Thomas was more aware of things, little twitches in his arms and tail the most movement he could muster. Yet he still remained focused on Cloud’s eyes even as struggled to understand what was happening. “I don’t…. I don’t understand. What are you saying? Doing? Are you…. Are you doing this? This feels…. Feels weird…..” his voice trailing off as he felt himself getting pulled deeper into her eyes. Feeling his mind slow to a crawl, even simple thoughts of realizing how slow his thoughts were a struggle.

“You don’t have to understand, you don’t have to think. You just need to keep staring. You’re forgetting why you would even want to look away. You’re forgetting about the things around you. You’re forgetting why you even came here. My eyes are pulling it all away from you. My gaze is too strong for your mind, memory, and control. All of them fade from you as you stare deeper. You can’t help it anymore. You’re just trapped. Trapped in my eyes.”

Cloud stalked closer to him with every sentence, her eyes getting ever bigger in Thomas’s view.

“Trapped...” Thomas said softly. “No, what are you.. Are you doing?” He was trying to look away. To move. To think. To do anything, but he found his gaze still locked on those eyes.

“I’m hypnotizing you. And when you enter a trance. A deep trance, like you are in right now, your mind comes to a stop, and you simply must.” She snaps her fingers again. “Obey. You can’t help but.” She snaps again, “Obey. You simply must.” A third snap. “Obey.”

“Obey...” Thomas said at the third snap, his body at attention, in more ways than one. His mind locked in trance. All he could do was, “obey...”

Cloud smiled. Both Thomas and Minoko echoed out a soft, “obey.” Mmm, they looked so hot like this. I’m going to need to do this more often. She glanced at her hand, fingers still positioned to deliver another snap. The book had talked about giving orders to guide their minds where I wanted, but it hadn’t said anything about distracting the targets. Or was the snap focusing them in harder? Either way it might be useful. Cloud gave a mental shrug, these were things she could look into later. The important thing was that it might give her an advantage if hypnotic push came to hypnotic shove. Still, she needed to look into more techniques. But right now… right now she had to program Thomas.

“That’s right, just obey and sink deeper. Deeper into trance, into obedience. The both of you will obey. Do anything I desire. Because it’s important to please me. It’s a priority really. To please me, serve me, obey me.” Cloud smiled as she looked from one entranced cutie to the other. Seeing Minoko’s happily dazed face made her want to see just how far this obedience could go. How far could she push Minoko?

“You did so well, My good pet.” She said, reaching out, caressing under Minoko’s chin. “And you need to please me, don’t you? It feels good to obey me doesn’t it pet?”

“Ahhh, yes Miss!” Minoko’s voice sounded so needy, so helpless.

“Tell me, would you normally go out, pick someone up, and fuck their brains out?”

“Mmm, nooo Miss. I would never.”

“But since I told you to do it….”

“I obey.” A soft moan and a little shudder passed through Minoko. Pleasure training seems to be effective for breaking down resistance and walls. It would help explain how easily Minoko crumbled for her now after their activities the night before. Probably for the best then. Now to use that against Thomas… I need him ready for tonight after all. She’d need to use that lever of control to break him down and build him back up just the way she wanted. She needed Thomas just right for her plan. And she knew just the way to do it too. She turned back to Minoko with a gleam in her eye.

“That’s right, you always obey. You’re My pet after all, and you know what would please me? You fucking our dear maid’s brains out while I whisper a few new ideas into his head. You’d love that, wouldn’t you?”

“Yesss Misss!” She hissed out, half a moan and half a whimper of bliss. “I would love to. I obey you always.” God Mino is so hot when she’s like this.

“That’s My good pet. Now as for you.” She looked at Thomas, still at attention and silently mouthing “I obey” over and over again. “You’re simply going to listen. Obey. Submit. You’re running on automatic. No thoughts in your head. Just like a doll being used. Of course, being a doll is so hot. You’re already dressed like one. So naturally, you’re a doll. Dolls don’t think, they don’t remember, they simply act as they are told. So my doll. Strip for us.”

Thomas, of course, obeyed like any hypnotized doll would, uniform quickly discarded into a pile on the ground and as he did he could hear Cloud’s voice, like a soft whisper in his ear. Commanding, controlling, so powerful. Her words just so irresistible and floating through his mind. Forget being here, forget her, forget Minoko, it’s all a haze a blur. All there is pleasure. Faceless, hot, intense pleasure. Because he’s a fuckdoll, and fuckdolls are mindless, used, played with. He was so hard. So needy. So eager to be a good doll and obey.

Minoko was in a haze of her own. A haze of pleasure, submission, obedience. Mistress was giving her commands, and she needed to listen and obey. It was such a relief. To not have to analyze things. To not have anxiety over choice. Not have to worry about all the details. She could just. Simply. Obey. She pushed Thomas onto the bed, quickly settling on his hard cock with a liquid moan of ecstasy. She was so wet, so obedient. Nothing else mattered to her. Just that hypnotic ride, up and down. She bounced in a blissful heat. Mistress was whispering things to Thomas. Thomas was sucking on Mistress’ breasts. He was a fuckdoll. Minoko knew she wasn’t a fuckdoll, she was a pet, a slave, property to her Mistress. Riding that cock, up and down. Faster, harder, so good. She whimpered out weakly.

Cloud let out a hot breath. Thomas’ lips on her breast as she whispered into his ear. Simple commands, her main goal was making it so that he wouldn’t know who either of them were. At least not until after he did his job. His job would be a simple one. Go to her place at a certain time. Meet up with Vanessa and her boyfriend. And slowly realize the boyfriend was a hypnotist. Call him out on it. Accuse him. Confront him about it and insist that he is hypnotizing Vanessa. But make sure this was done in the kitchen. It was important to keep things there. And if he did a good job...

Thomas moaned out as the pleasure suddenly doubled, setting his mind ablaze with bliss. The fuckdoll was obeying it’s purpose. Fuck, suck, obey. He needed to do a good job, to obey. That was his purpose, and he was a fuckdoll. Obeying required no thought. Just. Pleasure. Just. The fuckdoll moaned out, cumming hard. Everything faded. Went to black. Gone. Empty. Blank...

Minoko screamed out in bliss as Thomas came. Riding that pleasure. Taking the heat in, obeying blissfully. She served Mistress. Loved Mistress. Mistress was so perfect. Mistress knew what was best for her. Everything was fading. Perfect for Mistress. She slumped over, eyes closing as her world faded to black.

Cloud licked her lips as she settled into the bed alongside her pets. Everything was set up nicely. All she needed now was for Minoko to set up the hidden camera, put it in the kitchen, and then make herself scarce. There was a slight time crunch but… she could spare a moment for this. Minoko sleepily slid off of Thomas and lethargically moved herself to rest on the other side of Cloud, sandwiching her between the two floofs. Cloud pet along Minoko’s hair and was rewarded when the vixen started clinging to Cloud. The two of them resting together, Minoko’s head laying across her chest and Thomas’s tail splayed across her legs. Yes, they could stay like this for just a little longer.

Thomas couldn’t totally recall why he was here, but here he was. Outside of… Someone’s dorm. He frowned in thought, why would he be at someone’s dorm he didn’t know? He needed to be here because... What was it again? He knocked on the door. Why was he doing this? When the door opened he remembered! “Congratulations, Dusty Hays! You’ve won the cafe prize pool! I’ve come personally to give you the prize!”

“Dusty Hays?” Vanessa asked. Thomas blinked at the tanned girl before him. She was wearing what looked like a tight fitting pair of spandex shorts and a white t-shirt with a very low cut V. He paused for a moment as he tried to recall who Dusty Hays was himself.

Vanessa tilted her head as she thought about who this Dusty Hays was. She vaguely recalled a short girl, pretty hot with a killer rack and totally a bimbo, complete with the blonde hair and the slutty reputation. Maybe Master would like to meet her too! But she’d have to wait until this cute maid left. She was waiting for Cloud after all and didn’t want anything getting in the way of her meeting her Master! “She’s not here right now sweetie, but I can pass it along if you want.“

“No trouble at all! I can wait for her.” Thomas said, forcing his way past the girl. For some reason it was very important to force his way in, no matter what Vanessa said. “Wow, this place is really nice.”

“Who’s that, love?” Another voice asked in clear irritation.

“The cat boy maid from the cafe. He says that Dusty won a prize, but she’s not here.”

A tall guy walked into the room, white, medium length hair on his head and a small frown on his face. Even Thomas had to admit he was good looking in his black t-shirt and black jeans, the only real ornamentation coming from a necklace he was wearing and a green wristband. If I were to look up the definition of fuckboy….. Thomas mused to himself.

“Is that your boyfriend?” Thomas asked interjecting. “You know, you’re both wearing that wristband, what’s with that? I see people wearing it all the time now.”

“It’s nothing. You shouldn’t worry about—”

“Thomas! My name is Thomas. What about you?”

He let out a sigh, “I’m Hugh, or as Van here likes to call me. Daddy.” He said, grinning at the end.

“Right, um Daddy. I haven’t seen you around really, and I take walks around the campus area a lot. How did you and Vanessa meet?”

“We met at a recent party, what can I say, we hit it off fast and got to know each other, very, intimately.” He said walking to Vanessa and grabbing her ass. Vanessa let out a hot breath at the attention. Not saying anything.

“Right.” Thomas said, looking over the pair. “I will say, I’m not used to seeing her like that.”

“Oh no? Well, that doesn’t surprise me. This slut here just needed someone to show her place in the world, that’s all. Now that she knows it, she can’t help herself. Can you, slut?”

“Nooo Master.” Vanessa hissed out, her eyes more vacant, body squirming and grinding back against Hugh’s hand, “Use your slut however you see fit.”

Something about Hugh just felt slimy. How he talked down to Vanessa, how he was feeling her up, showing her off. Thomas didn’t like it. Even if it was sort of hot to watch, it still wasn’t ok. Why was Vanessa going with it? Unless? He squinted as he looked at Vanessa more closely, the way her eyes were all glazed over. I’ve fingerbanged my share of girls before but this kind of reaction is unnatural. It’s almost like she was… His eyes went wide.

“You hypnotized her didn’t you? Did some kind of brainwashing?” He suggested, walking towards the kitchen. He knew he had to go to the kitchen. Why did he have to go to the kitchen though? Oh right to put the cake down. Cakes need to go in the kitchen after all. And he was a good maid who always put the cakes perfectly where they needed to go.

He set the box of cake down, stepping off to the side until his back was to the fridge so that anyone trying to talk with him would have to stand in front of him. Right there. Right where a theoretical certain placed object that definitely doesn’t exist and he’d deny knowing about would allow for a good view of what was happening. Why did he do or know these things though? Was he a master hypnotist? Was this part of some plan of his he had forgotten? Yes… yes it must be that! “Well, I’m here to put a stop to that you scumbag.”

“You? Stop me?” Hugh laughed, having followed Thomas into the room, hand still kneading Vanessa’s ass as she stumbled in alongside him, soft moans escaping her. “Listen boy, you can stop me as much as this slut here can.”

“Fine then! I’ll prove it!” Thomas said, looking into Hugh’s eyes, “Look into my eyes. Look deep into my eyes and feel your mind go quiet. Look deeper into my eyes. Feeling sleepy.”

As Thomas took action, so did Hugh, focusing his own energy as he spoke to Thomas, his own eyes beginning to softly leak light. “Looking deep into my eyes makes it hard to think. So you keep looking. You keep sinking. You keep falling. My eyes hold you in place.”

Thomas was staring into Hugh’s eyes, deeper into them. Deep into them. It stirred a vague memory of looking into pretty eyes before that quickly was smothered as he focused his attention on Hugh’s eye’s, mouth parting slightly as he listened to his words.. “Yea. Looking deep into my eyes. You look and you feel. Sleepy. So sleepy as you stare into my eyes.”

“Sleepier and sleepier as you stare. Thoughts fading fast. Mind fading faster. Until it stops. Until you stop. And you keep staring. Deeper into my eyes. Because your mind stops now.” Hugh says, his voice dominant, commanding.

“Sleepier... And...” Thomas’ voice softened and trailed off as his mind stopped. Standing, staring, he could only look into Hugh’s eyes. Deeper into them. Sinking into them.

“No more thoughts. Your mind stops. It can’t move. You can’t move. Only deeper, bitch. Only more submissive. Only my voice. Only my eyes. You’re nothing. You’re worthless. You can’t stand up to me. You’re powerless.”

“Powerless...” Thomas said, slowly sinking to his knees. Staring up at Hugh. He was powerless, worthless. Far less than this man. He could only think about obeying his betters. Obeying those stronger than him. More than him.

“That’s what you get, just another slut.” He looked over to Vanessa, who was also kneeling. “Fuck you’re such a weak little bitch. Stand up, wake up. What’s with Cloud, where is your hot roommate?”

Vanessa shook her head, “Let me see Master.” seeing a text from Cloud she was quick to learn that her roommate ran into some issue and couldn’t make it. They could try again, same time tomorrow though. “Will that do Master?”

“Yes, but we’re taking this maid slut with us. Maybe he’ll be good at polishing some poles and licking up messes.” He said, pointing down to Thomas with a cruel chuckle. “Fucking failed ass hypnotist, gotta put him through the ringer just in case. Lead him along, call the car and get him ready for pick up. You have work to do.”

Vanessa did as she was told, calling for the van to be brought around as her Master looked the cake over before taking a bite. “Shit this is good fucking cake….”

She kneeled down beside Thomas and slipped her hand under the maid uniform’s skirt, quickly removing his underwear and beginning to stroke his rapidly growing cock. She leaned in to moan breathy words of submission into his ears as she kept him on the edge, always pulling back if she thought he was getting too close, listening to his cute moans and mewls indifferently. She had a job to do for her Master, that thought alone arousing her to her own needy edge.

Vanessa and Thomas kneeled together like that for 15 minutes waiting for the car, a small chime coming from Vanessa’s phone letting her know it was here. She guided the cat boy along to the car, her Master walking impatiently ahead of her. She quickly moved Thomas into the back seats and got in with him. No sooner had the doors closed then screens on the backs of the seats lit up, bathing the interior in a soft glow of colors.

In the car Thomas was treated to the same spiral that Vanessa had enjoyed just a few days ago.. Words of submission and obedience flashing into his already empty mind. LISTEN. OBEY. SLAVE. PLEASURE. And there was so much pleasure as he obeyed. Vanessa was sucking him off as they rode to their destination. Her lips wrapped around his cock. Sucking hard. “Edge.” He would mumble it out, telling his captors that he was close. He needed to obey and let them know he was about to cum. That way she could stop, let him calm, and then go again. Sucking, obeying, serving Master. “Edge...Edge……Edge….”