The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

It’s nearly closing time, everyone’s long gone for the parade. Leo wasn’t the type for the crowd, and so he stayed behind while his colleagues left. There were no more than a few loners left in the bar, Leo spent his remaining concentration on the TV. After all it’s the first time he could actually hear it.

He was just finishing his drink when a woman walked in through the door. Leo figured she’s looking for someone seeing the bar’s closing soon. He took a good look at her to see if it’s anyone he knew. It wasn’t any he knew, but definitely someone he’d love to get to know though. The woman’s obviously been on the parade, with the suit, tie and a suitcase. Maybe it was her costume, whatever or whoever she’s meant to be.

The woman walked passed the other drunks without giving them a look, and came straight for his table. His ears were heating up quick, and butterflies in his stomach.

“Mr. Ankis,” the woman spoke as she sat herself down, “how are you this fine evening?”

“I’m okay, could be better.” Leo replied nodding his head slowly with a smile, playing it cool for now, “And I might know you from?”

The woman drew herself closer to Leo before whispering, “The bible, movies, fairy tales, any fiction relating to the subject of Satan.”

Leo rolled his eyes a bit, looking for a punch line, “Okay, are you a heroine or a villain?”

“Well that’s merely prospective,” said the woman as she sat back down, “I mean ignoring the fact that most fictions relating to me are bias to the black and white image, good and evil and everything.”

“You’re making yourself sound like the bad guys.” Leo couldn’t explain the calmness that overwhelmed him suddenly, as though he’s merely talking to an old friend rather than a sex symbol. He looked beyond the woman in suit to gain attention that the other customers are very interested in their conversation, or at least the woman’s body.

“More comfortable now Mr. Ankis? Would you like me to call you Leo?” the woman smiled, suggesting the fact that she’s read his thoughts.

“Yeah, erm...” Leo tried to piece together why the woman mentioned comfort, still ignoring the fact that she knew his name, “how... why did you bring that up? I mean...”

“Oh, I guess I have to draw you a picture then... How about... I read your thoughts and made some amendments?” the woman’s coming more playful with her tone.

Just then the bar maid rang the bell at the counter, “Closing time in 5 minutes.”

“Like I said Leo, I’m known from biblical stories, and yes I’ve been perceived as the villain. And yes, I am the biggest of them all, Satan himself.” The woman continued.

Leo’s more puzzled, by the fact that he’s even calmer than before, more like accepting what the woman’s suggesting.

“Now that we’ve established our positions, and yes you can call me Satan, yes I can read you so you can stop thinking and start talking. I don’t think we need more attention than needed.” keeping her voice quiet, “I’m here because I have a proposal for you.”

“What might that be? My soul for three wishes?” Leo queried.

“On the contrary, I don’t care about your soul. But you can bring me some, and it’ll be mutually beneficial.” She brought her suit case up onto the table.

“Can I ask what happens if I refused? I mean if you are Satan, there’s a god right?” Leo calmly asked.

“Like I said, how you perceive god and me, it’s all prospective. The reality is less black and white than you think. And I promise it’s a good offer for you.” She opened her suitcase.

Under the dim light it was difficult to make out what it was, but it was clearly expensive.

“While the suitcase comes with it, but it’s what’s inside that’s important. The suitcase’s quite nice actually, I bought it in Italy.” The woman started explaining.

“You bought it? Being Satan and all that... oh okay, it’s the prospective thing again, isn’t it?” Leo’s enjoying his calmness and making the most outta it in conversation with Satan.

“Well I paid for it, but I didn’t earn the cash.” She witted. “Anyhow it’s a collar, though it looks more like a necklace.”

“Well thanks but I’m not really the jewelry type.” Leo continued with his interruptions.

“We don’t have long before they kick us out, so please pay attention.” She answered.

“Well if you’re Satan, can’t you make the bar maid let us stay a little longer?” Leo suggested.

The woman turned around, waved at the bar maid. The bar maid came over slowly with a little annoyance on her face. Suddenly all the other customers stood up at the same time, and walked out of the bar.

The bar maid arrived at the table and asked, “What can I do for ya?”

The suited woman waited for the last customer to leave the bar, before turning back to Leo. She gave him a little smile and turned to the bar maid, “Why don’t you start by sitting on my laps and giving me a kiss?”

While calm Leo could clearly feel himself having an erection, and he couldn’t wait to see where this was going.

Without hesitation the bar maid sat comfortably on the woman’s laps, and the two started a passionate french kiss. The woman had one hand on the bar maid’s neck, and the other undoubtfully under her panties already.

A full thirty second passed before they finished, as Satan drew herself away from the bar maid who still had her tongue briefly.

“Now take your pants off and start masturbating on top of that table, but don’t come yet, wait for me first.” Satan instructed the bar maid.

“Okay so we have more time at our hands, allow me to explain my proposal. And feel free to have a wank now, I’ve seen it all before.” Satan had a lick on her lips, collecting the bar maid’s saliva.

“Nah I think I’ll pass... but I would like to ask the whole thing about you being a chick and all that. I thought you were a guy?” Leo tried hard not to look over the next table at the bar maid, shifting his sitting position before he got himself more comfortable over an oversize package under his pants.

“I’m neither man nor woman, same goes to your all mighty. I think you should stop making assumptions. But I think it’s more interesting to walk around town as a woman.” Satan shifted her sitting position too to take a good look at the bar maid, who’s masturbating in silence, “You can moan if you want to hun, do whatever you feel comfortable even without my permission, as long as you’re masturbating without coming on that table.”

Leo waited until she’s finish before asking, “So what’s the deal?”

“The proposal is this collar. The idea is simple, you get girls to wear it, and that’s it.” She tone seemed to suggest that she’d lost interest in explaining, focusing on the bar maid.

“What you want girls to wear it? Like on the streets?” Leo couldn’t quite work out the whole deal yet, “And what’s my benefit?”

Satan searched inside the suitcase and took the collar out, which does look more like a necklace by the width and jewels on it. “You can stop now hun, come over here and knee.”

The bar maid followed the instructions to the exact, walking over naked and moist waist down. She then kneed in front of their table. Satan placed the necklace around the bar maid’s neck. It’s crusted with diamonds all around joined by a silvery thread, the diamonds were bigger the closer it got to the center, and the center piece was at least an inch in diameter. Each diamond were about a inch apart.

Satan held the center diamond and pressed it with a little weight before letting go, the entire necklace immediately reacted. The silvery thread seemed to have tighten up, all the diamonds closed their gaps until they were packed together, the necklace looked more like a collar now, fitting tightly around the bar maid’s neck. The bar maid let out a soft moan, and froze with her eyes and lips slacked open.

“As you see, you press the center gem.” Satan explained, “and the collar starts... functioning. That’s what I need you to do.”

Leo gave Satan a puzzled and suspicious look, “So then what happens?”

“Well why don’t you observe the colour of the center gem, while I pour us a another pint?” Satan rose as she spoke and went straight to the counter. The bar maid’s just stayed kneeling there. Whatever aura Satan used to make Leo feel comfortable, it’s making him feel nervous, unable to feel uncomfortable about the whole display he just witnessed.

He continued to observe the center gem, slightly worried about what effect it’d have on him. But then, he was still feeling very comfortable, just not physically with his erection and all that.

Slowly he acknowledged the gem’s change in colour. It began to actually give off light of it’s own, glow dimly in green. He had to get rather close to see the dim light, and he looked the bar maid in the eyes a few times. Her lips were still apart, and saliva were clearly gathering on the edge, waiting to dribble out.

Satan soon returned to the table with two cocktails, which he drank worry free.

“When the glow reaches its limit, it’ll stop glowing and the gem will stay green. That is unless you take it off.” Satan rinsed her mouth with her cocktail before continuing, “Before the gem settles in a particularly colour, it stays locked on her neck. Of course that means green isn’t the only colour.”

“How many?” Leo asked, showing ten times more interest in the matter than before.

“Next stage is yellow, then red, just like the traffic lights.” She smiled, “Then take it off.”

“What do the colours mean?”

“The stability of the subject,” she had another sip of her drink, “hence how obedient she is. Green, she accepts you as the dominant figure; yellow, she’s happy to serve you, she’d want to serve you; red, she’d go beyond that and wants others to serve you.”

Leo couldn’t quite take in what he just heard, but again, he’s accepting it quite calmly. “Yeah... yeah that sounds very beneficial to me,” he started to blush, “but what’s it to you?”

“Don’t you remember? I want you to bring me some souls. Their souls.” Satan explained, still enjoying her cocktail.

“So what? A part of their soul’s drained everytime the gem changes colour?” Leo had a quick look at the gem on the bar maid, and couldn’t help but notice her top was wetted by her saliva from her slacked mouth.

“Does it really matter how it’s done? I told you what you get out of the proposal, you just need to agree to it.”

“Well I’m interested, I’d like to know what’s happening before signing any deals.”

“There are no contracts, you take it or you leave it. But opportunities like these don’t happen often.”

“Why me then?”

“Cos you have a good taste in woman, and you’re able to befriend them, with the ability to put a necklace around women.”

“What if I insist on knowing how it works?”

“Then the deal’s off.”

Leo sat back, he had a good look at the gem on the bar maid, it was glowing stronger by the minute.

“You saying she’d serve me did you?” he queried.

“Yes, they’ll serve whoever they can see during the operation.”

“That means you and me?”

“Well anyone will serve me if I want them to, but yes.”

“And...” Leo gave the next question a deep thought, “And the girls who gets the collar, you’re saying you get their souls right? Doesn’t that means I’m denying them a place in heaven?”

Satan couldn’t help but smiled, “It’s not all black and white, and no I don’t kept their souls when they die. Whether or not they go to heaven if down to their souls.”

“So it doesn’t make me a bad guy?”

“You’ll be in the grey area.”

Leo started downing the cocktail while Satan maintained a steady speed with her drink.

“What about her job?”

“Well unless you tell her to quit her job, she’s still a bar maid here.”

“But I can ask her to do anything I want whenever I want?”

“Yes, but the colour of the gem determines how she feels about your orders.”

“And what happens after red?”

“You take it off.”

“It doesn’t change after red?”

“The next stage is black, the gem will lose it’s power completely.”

“What happens to the woman wearing it?”

“Same as before, but with more tricks up her sleeves when it comes to serving you.”

“I’ll take it.”

Satan smiled again, as the deal closest, “No more questions?”

“You have a number I can call if I need?”

“You’ll never see me again after this, I promise you that much.” She smiled again and went for another sip of her cocktail, except this time, her sip finishes the entire drink. “Well Leo, it’s nice doing business with you,” she stood from the table, “I’ll leave you two alone then. Oh yeah, it’s women only”

Immediately panic feelings came rushing back to Leo’s body, he could feel the excitement, and worries in his chest and stomach. It was simply overwhelming after the zen aura, he didn’t even see the suited woman reaching the door.

“You’re the first person I dealt with who never addressed me once, not even as Satan.” She spoke softly from distance but it reached Leo as though she was whispering into his ears. And then she left through the front door after turning the “open / close” sign around.

Silence and peace at last. Leo sat back in deep thoughts, calculating the possibilities of this new toy, and panicked as he thought about Lynn, his girlfriend for the pass three months. Lynn was more than sexual feelings, and the pure love they have couldn’t possibly be under influence by this devil’s instrument.

As he thought the entire room darkened as though the fuse had blown. The green glow from the gem had been so strong that it lit the entire room up, and now it’s stopped and the bar’s back to it’s dim lighting.

Leo observed as the collar relaxed and the bar maid coming around. Her first reaction was to wipe the saliva off her mouth, before pondering what she was doing half naked kneeling on the floor.

“Hi.” Leo spoke.

“Yes?” the bar maid answered.

“What’s your name?” he asked.

“Sue.” She answered.

“It’s passed closing time, but can you pour me a pint?” Leo wanted to test if the collar really worked with a less offensive order, to which the bar maid complied. She walked straight off without a second thought, still naked beneath.

“Oh second thought,” he stopped her, getting more excited. “come over here and kneel.”

The second of the evening was better than anything he could imagine. She pleasured him all too well that he was exhausted before even thinking about the next colour for the gem. He was aware of the unwilling look on Sue’s face, nothing too hard to fix when he thought of ordering her to put on a happy face.

The two retired after a blowjob, Sue masturbated to orgasm twice before Leo recovered for another blowjob, Sue continued to play with herself with ice cubes, drinks, fruit and finished the night giving another blowjob.