The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive
Author: MrXDevine
Story: Neil’s Revenge
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Neil’s Revenge.

Chapter 3

Three weeks later,

For the first few days Neil was a shut in, after the humiliation’s he had suffered he didn’t feel comfortable yet travelling outside but he had spent his time stuck at home wisely.

After throwing out all the degrading clothes that Amy used to make him wear he went about ordering all the new clothes he would ever need from online clothing shops as well as fully stocking the fridge.

Neil had lost weight while under Amy’s control, she would only ever let him eat leftover food and other scraps when she could be bothered to feed him, he ordered all his favourite foods and had used Amy as his doorwoman to sign for all the deliveries ...naked of course.

Neil had also spent time making Amy explain all the drugs side effects and where she had got up to with the development also making her move money to some offshore accounts that only Neil had access too.

Neil had kept in touch with Jason via e-mail and phone but both admitted that they could not look each other in the eye after what had happened. They decided that it would be best if they stayed in touch due to them both being stuck with the same problem as well as being a back up for each other should something go wrong.

After making an appointment with a solicitor who had drawn up the paperwork to not only get his apartment back under his name but also to change his name back officially to Neil.

The solicitor did raise some questions as to why he changed his name in the first place but Neil quickly said that it was a stag part joke that went to far after drinking too much beer.

Neil had spent a lot of time trying to get back in touch with Donna who was his ex fiancé but she had already got engaged to Neil’s best friend, neither wanted anything to do with him, neither did his family with he took very hard.

Neil had to admit to himself that there were some bridges that could never be mended while pulling up in his parking spot at the apartment in his new Jaguar.

He had just met with his mom and brother in a restaurant for the first time in months, it did not go well, and even his dad had refused to show up. His brother was still disgusted and his mom said he was a disgrace to the family and never wanted to hear from him again.

No matter what Neil tried they would not listen; dejected and heartbroken he decided to go back home.

As Neil walked through the front door he smiled at the sight in front of him, he had left Amy to wash the floor but she could not use her hands or any hot water.

Amy was reduced crawling on all fours with her ass high in the air, her ass had a long flesh covered dildo hanging out of it, swinging away like a tail on a dog.

Amy was reduced to using a bucket of cold water, dipping her big breasts into the bucket and wiping them across the floor. Her nipples were standing out like bullets as they dragged along the floor. She had been at this for ages as the entire floor of the apartment was wood and tile.

Neil never once laid a finger on Amy but god knows he really wanted to especially on days like this but he knew that if he did he would be no better then her so he had made an effort to take good care of her when he was not busy thinking up new ways of punishing her, well Neil admitted, better care than she took of me.

“Have you finished you task slut?”

“No I have not, its not easy without a fucking mop”.

Neil had toyed with the idea of making her call him master or sir but after being deprived of his real name for so long, he wanted to hear it as much as he could.

He did consider changing her personality to one that is more subservient but decided against it, he loved hearing her fiery responses and complete hatred of her new position in life.

“You can finish it later, get you ass in the shower, and remember no hot water Neil demanded”.

“How can I forget, I don’t have a fucking choice in the matter”.

Amy got up and walked towards the shower, the thick long dildo still deep into her rectum, she stomped her feet like a child throwing a tantrum into the bathroom.

She switched on the shower to cold and removed the dildo from her ass, putting it on the side of the floor of the shower to clean later.

Amy had been given her own shower gel to use that stripped all the hair from her body from below her neck and used normal shampoo for her head.

She hated every second of her new existence, she was now penniless, homeless and after last week she had lost most of her precious positions.

She had to throw out all her nice expensive clothes, shoes, and underwear so all that remained was the stuff she used to entrap men and the kind of clothes that a whore wouldn’t wear. The shoes were the hard part, she loved shoes, her life was shoes and after that cunt had got been thought them she was only left with the tacky, kinky shit.

He laughed at her as all of the beautiful jimmy choo’s shoes she had were destroyed in front of her face, he made her cut most of them.

She had not spoken to Sarah since that horrible day he took over, she was really worried for her now, Neil would only say that she was being taken care of just the way she deserves.

How could Sarah have left the drugs in such a stupid place, what was the matter with a fucking locked drawer.

“I warned her Amy thought, keep them hidden, don’t let the slaves near them but no, she had to get cocky, after all this time to be stopped and enslaved by this pathetic...its just not fair” she screamed.

Shaking with anger and shivering with cold water Amy continued to rage against the injustice of her situation.

Amy got out of the shower and, her once perfect blonde hair now matted and ruined running down her back she left the bathroom and walked outside onto the balcony.

Neil had thought that it would be good for her to dry off naturally and to keep in shape so he gave her instructions that after she had a shower she must go outside and perform yoga and aerobics on the balcony until he gave her permission to come inside.

Today was a really cold, the wind hit her like a slap in the face but her body was already doing some stretches, bending her cold body into some obscene poses.

Neil watched from the window, he had started to like having her at his command.

He never would forget what she had done to him or what she is capable of doing to others but there was a bond forming with her and maybe something deeper he was feeling towards her, worried him the most.

After a few minutes of leaving Amy to twist and pose outside Neil called some instruction to her.

“Slut, get your ass inside”.

Amy had never moved so fast in her life to get inside the apartment.

Neil had a medium sized pink bag in his hand, Amy recognised it as her old bag that she used to carry her books in at university. He dropped the bag on the floor and sat down in his leather chair.

“Come her and blow me with that worthless mouth”.

Amy dropped down to her knees and unbuckled the belt of his tailor made trousers, pulling the zipper down to free Neil’s growing cock she gently took it in her hand and stroked it up and down.

Amy had been instructed that when giving a blow job she had to keep eye contact with the mans face at all times.

Taking his manhood into her warm sexy mouth she put her hands behind her back while gently sucked his cock, in long slow movements she moved her head up and down giving the maximum amount of pleasure she could to her ex slave.

Amy could feel herself getting very horny, she knew it was another of Neil’s instructions but she couldn’t control her body. The heat between her legs was starting to drive her wild; the more she sucked the hotter she felt.

“Bend over bitch” he commanded, “I want you to beg me to fuck you”.

Amy bent over, legs apart and her ass as high in the air as it would go.

“Please fuck me” Neil, “I need your huge cock inside me, please fuck me anyway you want” she begged.

Neil pushed his cock into her wet, hot pussy, he felt how tight it was, how eager she was to have his cock inside her. Every sex session with Amy started the same way, by mercilessly fucking her hard and not caring if he hurt her.

“You can cum when I cum, not before understand bitch”.

All Amy could manage was a small sound of acknowledgment as he continued to ravage her aching fuck hole.

It didn’t take long for him to explode into her dripping cunt, seconds later he felt her cum hard and loud.

That was the one thing Neil thought that he really would miss about her.

Neil stood up with his partially erect cock hanging between his legs, looking down at the now exhausted Amy.

“I have put you some clothes on the sofa, your to get dressed and must follow the following instructions”.

Amy moved over towards the sofa to take a look at the first clothes she had been aloud to wear for weeks.

“Your going to find all the people you have screwed up and free them as well as pay them off with interest for what you have taken from them in any way they see fit, cash, services, ect I really don’t care but you will set things right”.

Amy stood there in total amazement; she had never expected him to make her do this.

“I have left a note book with all the names and last known address where you left them and a credit card with all the money you will need to set things right”.

Amy looked at Neil in shock, not knowing if her was joking or not.

“You are not to use the money on yourself other than to get food, transport and shelter and any thing else you need but only if they are required for your task or to help you survive nothing more also in case you have some problems along the way I have left a pack of your mind control drugs in your bag, you may only use them to free people”.

Amy heart started to beat faster as she realised that Neil had just made his first mistake.

“The moment I get out of her I will take that drug and free myself then free Sarah” Amy plotted.

“You will not try to contact Sarah or anyone else for help, you are in this alone, you must find and help all the people on the list”.

Fear overwhelmed Amy’s senses, just thinking about what she had done to some of the family’s in the past.

“They will all kill me,” cried Amy.

“When you are done, you may return her but not before, there is a mobile phone in the bag that you may only use to if it is to help you complete you mission”.

“One more thing, sleepyamy”.

When Amy awoke she didn’t feel any different.

“What did you do to me?” Amy demanded.

“Left a few little instructions to help you on your way” Neil replied, “oh by the way, I would not try to take any of the mind control drug yourself” Neil grinned.

“Please tell me what did you do,” Amy begged.

“Lets just say that you would not like the outcome if you tried to use it” Neil replied with a bigger smile.

“Now get dressed and get out of my home”.

Amy got up and walked over to the sofa, he had laid out a tight red top, pink and white cheerleader style skirt, a very small pink thong and a pair of pink high heels.

“You can’t be serious, I cannot wear this shit she said as her body had already started putting on the top”.

“Its either that or you go out naked” Neil said with a chuckle.

Amy put on the rest of the ridiculous clothes, the top was so tight her nipples were showing through and the skirt was so short it hung just below her pussy.

Amy finished getting dressed and walked over picking up the pink bag.

“Oh I forgot one thing, her take these”, Neil threw two pink hair bobbles at Amy; she picked them up in disgust.

“I hate you” Amy growled as she dropped the bag and put the bobbles in her hair making two very cute ponytails.

Amy picked up the bag and left without saying another word.

A part of Neil was sad to see her go but he knew it was the right thing to do.

To be continued?

All feedback welcome.

I am hoping to write the first chapter of a new story involving Amy and her new quest and allow other authors to write their own individual chapter / chapters.

If anyone is interested please feel free to contact me.

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