The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

“GOOD GIRL”

By Mesmerr

SEVEN

‘You have a nice ass, for a virgin.’

‘Ohh!’

‘No, you do, really. I’m actually very proud that my slave has such a nice ass.’

‘Oh, god! Don’t!’

‘Better than the ass’s of other slaves I’ve seen.’

‘Oh?’

‘Yes, much better. Very firm. Your cheeks are very tight.’

‘Really?’

‘Yes. A tight-ass slave.’

‘Oh!’

‘Yes. My little tight-ass slave.’

‘Oh.’

‘Are you embarrassed lying nude across my knee with your legs spread, knowing I can see your pubic hairs from behind?

‘Oh, god, yes! I am! Don’t look!’

‘Don’t be a stupid slave. I’m supposed to look. How else could I enjoy having a slave?’

‘Oh!’

‘Are you going to enjoy being a slave, do you think?’

‘Yes. I-I want to.’

‘Well, can’t I enjoy being a master, too, and enjoy what masters do?’

‘I-I guess you can.’

‘It’ seems only fair, don’t you think?’

‘I—... Yes.’

‘Good girl.

‘Oh.’

Tight-ass.’

‘Oh! Hehe.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Heheheh.’

‘So, I can look and enjoy, too?’

‘I- ... Oh, god. Yes.’

‘Thank you.’

‘That’s okay.’

‘Just lift your hips a bit. My cock is hard now, but all bent over.’

‘Oh!’

‘Yes. Can’t you feel it pressing into your belly?’

‘Oh! I-I- ... Yes.’

‘Just hold it there. Ahhh. That’s good. That’s better. Settle down again.’

‘’OH!’

‘Yes. Now you can feel it against your cunt, can’t you?’

‘Oh! Yes! I-I—’

‘It’s okay. That’s where it’s supposed to be felt.’

‘Oh?’

‘Did you say you did or you didn’t have any hairs between your buttocks?’

‘No! Oh, god! Don’t!’

‘The rule, remember? Remember the rule or double your punishment.’

‘Oh, god! Please? Don’t look!’

‘Who said I was going to?’

‘Ohh?’

‘I just asked you if you did or did not have hairs there.’

‘I-I-don’t know. Oh, Jes-OHHHH! GOD! OOHHHHH!’

‘You do.’

‘Oh, god! Please? Let them go! Please!’

‘But I want to look and enjoy being a master for a moment or two. Would you deny me that small amount of enjoyment compared to all you’ll have in the future as a slave in the world-wide club?’

‘Oh! God! Please?’

‘What a beautiful crack.’

‘Oh, please? God! Don’t look there! Please?’

‘A beautiful dark hairy crack.’

‘Oh, no! Please, don’t!’

‘Mmmmmm. I love it. I really do.’

‘Ohhh.’

‘Yes, I do.’

‘A-A world-wide slave club?’

‘Yes, world-wide.’

‘Oh?’

‘Yes, a big club you belong to now.’

‘Oh.’

‘Does that please you?’

‘Yes.’

‘Good girl.’

‘OH!’

‘It’s okay. That was my cock flexing. It’s getting harder being so close to your cunt without actually going all the way inside.’

‘Oh! Please?’

‘Doesn’t it feel good pressing you like that?’

‘No! I-I mean, yes, but-but—’

‘That’s okay. You can press back if you like. Slaves are allowed to do that when they’re being punished for breaking a rule. That’s how they get started juicing up for later. That’s why they like being punished.’

‘Oh!’

‘And you did break a rule, didn’t you?’

‘Oh! ... Yes. They like being ... punished? Why?’

‘Because they get all juiced up between the legs for their master to have sex with them afterward.

‘Oh!’

‘Makes it so much easier to stick their dicks inside when your cunt is all slippery and slick.’

‘Oh! ..... Just because they’re-they’re punished?’

‘No. Because your pussy is pressing back down onto my dick.’

‘Oh!’

‘And you did ask me to punish you, didn’t you?’

‘Yes, but—’

‘No buts or you’re out of the club, remember? You don’t want that.’

‘No! But-I-oh, god!’

‘That’s right. You don’t, do you?’

‘Ohhh! ... No.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Ohhh-OH! DON”T! PLEASE!’

‘I’m just feeling your ass.’

‘No! Please! Don’t!’

‘Yes, I will and you’ll let me, won’t you, because your still hypnotized and you know it. Won’t you.’

‘Oh, god! Oh, god!’

‘Won’t you.’

‘Oh, god! I-I—.... Yes.’

‘Good girl.

‘Ohhhh! OHH!’

‘You have a tight little rim there. It’s nice.’

‘Oh! Please! Oh, god!’

‘Might stick my tongue in it soon.’

‘NO! Oh, god! Oh Jesus! Please!’

‘Maybe.’

‘Ohhh!’

‘Maybe not.’

‘Ohhh-OOHHHH!’

‘Feels good though. Feels tight with just the tip of my finger.’

‘NO! OHHH! STOP! Please!’

‘No. I won’t. You just settle down and let me enjoy myself like a good little slave.’

‘OHHH! Argh! OHHH! Please!’

‘Still tight with even half my finger.’

‘Oh, god, no! Don’t! Please! NO-AARRGH!’

‘Even with all my finger.’

‘OHHHH! God, don-ohhhhh!’

‘That wasn’t so bad, was it?’

‘YES!’

‘No, it wasn’t. You just didn’t give yourself the time to enjoy it like the other slaves do, that’s all.’

‘It WAS! It HURT!’

‘No, it didn’t. There are more sexual nerve-endings where my finger was than in your clit. Did you know that?’

‘NO!’

‘There are.’

‘Oh, GOD!’

‘Most slaves can orgasm from just their master’s finger sliding in and out of their ass.’

‘No! Oh, god, no! They-they can’t!’

‘They do.’

‘No!’

‘They do.’

‘They can’t!’

‘Why not?’

‘It hurt!’

‘No, it didn’t, and, they do.’

‘Ohhh.’

‘They do.’

‘..........’

‘Yes, they certainly do, and it’s supposed to be twice as powerful an orgasm that way, too.’

‘..........’

‘It’s amazing, really. They love it.’

‘Do-do they?’

‘That’s what the other master’s tell me they say.’

‘Oh?’

‘Yes. That’s what they say.’

‘Oh.’

‘Yes. They do, really.’

‘Oh?’

‘Yes, really.’

‘Oh.’

‘Settled down now?’

‘I- ... Yes.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Ohhh.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Ohh, mmm.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Heheh-Oh! Don’t!’

‘Why not?’

‘If I laugh I-I-It... presses me.’

‘I know. Feels good, doesn’t it?’

‘No! I mean, yes-I mean, oh, god! Don’t make me laugh.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Heheh. Don’t! Please?’

‘Okay. Your loss.’

‘Oh, go-OHHH!’

‘That doesn’t hurt though, does it? Tell the truth now.’

‘Oh, god! I-It—’

‘The truth, remember the rule?’

‘Ye-oh, god! ... No.’

‘Of course it doesn’t. Two fingers inside a slave’s cunt doesn’t hurt anybody.’

‘Ohhh!’

‘Do they?’

‘Ohhhh! ... No!’

‘Of course they don’t. And when they move inside your tight wet pussy like this, it feels good, doesn’t it?’

‘Ohh, god! Oh, god!’

‘Yes? The truth now, remember?’

‘Oh, god! Yes!’

‘Wasn’t so hard to admit, was it?’

‘........... No.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘Now my fingers are all covered with your juice.’

‘Oh!’

‘Yes, all slick and shiny, glistening.’

‘Oh, god.’

‘I’ll take them out and taste you.’

‘NO! Oh, god! Please! Don’t do tha-ohhh!’

‘Mmmmmm. Too late.’

‘Ohhh, god! No!’

‘Yes, too late. You taste great.’

‘Oh, please?’

‘And they’re all slippery now, too.’

‘Ohhh-OOHHHHHHH!’

‘Didn’t hurt at all then, did it?’

‘YES!—

‘The truth or more punishment. Your choice now, remember. I have a slippery finger all the way up inside your tight virgin ass and it doesn’t hurt, does it? The truth or out.’

‘OH! Oh, god! Oh, Jesus!’

‘The fucking truth, girl. Now.’

‘Ohhh! I-It-oh, god!’

‘Now.’

‘Ohh!.............. No.’

‘There. What about if I slide it in and out?’

‘NO! Don-OH! OHH! Ohhh! Ohhh! Ohhh! Ohhh! Pllease! Ohhh! Ohhh! Ohhh, god!’

‘Feel hot now?’

‘NO!’

‘You sure are juicing for a slave that doesn’t feel hot. I can see it running from the lips of your black hairy cunt.’

‘No! Oh, no! Please? Don’t look! Please!’

‘Now you tell the truth and remember the rule. You’re hot to trot right now, aren’t you?’

‘No! I’m—’

‘The truth or double the punishment.’

‘No! I-I’m—....... Oh, god! Please?’

‘The truth.’

‘Oh, god! Yes!’

‘Good girl. And you got that way from my slippery finger sliding in and out of your tight hairy ass, didn’t you?’

‘Don’t! Oh, god! Please, don’t?’

‘Might put my dick in your ass, too.’

‘NO! Oh, no! You can’t! Not there! No!’

‘After my tongue.’

‘NO! Oh, my GOD! Please! Oh, NO! You can’t! Please?’

‘Maybe.’

‘Oh, god, no!’

‘Maybe not.’

‘Ohhhh-OHHH.’

‘Your cheeks are all warm.’

‘Ohh!’

‘Just rubbing them all over and they feel very warm.’

‘Ohhh!’

‘That must feel good, mustn’t it?’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘No?’

‘Ohhh.......Yes.’

‘That’s because I’m warming up your skin.’

‘Ohhh.’

‘Yes. Warming the flesh for what’s coming.’

‘Oh? Wha-OWw! OWw! OWw! OWw! OWw! OWw! OWw! OWw! OWw! Oww!’

(crying)

‘That’s fair. Five apiece.’

(weeping)

‘Boy, are they red.’

(sobbing)

‘They look absolutely gorgeous. They really do.’

(Gasping broken hearted)

‘OHH!’

‘Settle down. I’m only rubbing them down again. Cooling them off. Smoothing them out.’

‘Ohhhh!’

(sniffing broken hearted)

‘Ohhhhh.’

‘Feels good now, doesn’t it?’

‘Ohhhh.......No!’

‘Liar.’

‘Doesn’t!’

‘Want some more?’

‘NO!’

‘Then tell the truth. Your ass feels good now, hot but good. Doesn’t it?’

‘No! It hurts! It’s throbbing!’

‘Just like my cock.’

‘Ohh!’

‘Yes. Hot and hard and throbbing to poke you good, right in the cunt.’

‘Ohh!

‘Yes. Do you think you’ll break that rule again?’

‘NO!’

‘Which rule was that?’

‘The-the-ohh! That rule!’

‘You don’t know.’

‘I do! And I won’t!’

‘Ever?’

‘NO!’

‘I think we might make sure.’

‘NO! I-Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww!’

‘Now you won’t.’

(crying broken hearted)

‘Will you?’

(Sobbing deeply and shaking her head)

‘No, you won’t, will you?’

(Shaking her head vigorously, and weeping continuously)

‘OHH!’

‘Settle down. I’m just rubbing your skin cool again.’

‘Ohhh!’

‘Yes. Cooling your hot tight ass down again.’

‘Ohhhh!’

‘Yes. Smoothing out all the skin again.’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘Yes.’

‘Oohhhhh.’

‘Yes. Boy, is it fucking red.’

‘Ohhhh!’

(crying again, broken hearted.)

‘So’s my hand, but it feels good. Warm and throbbing, like my dick, but it feels good.’

‘Ohhhhh.’

‘Doesn’t your ass feel the same way? Warm and throbbing? The truth or you’ll get more.’

‘Ohhhh.............Yes.’

(sniffing deeply and often.)

‘Good girl.’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘Yes.’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Ohhhhh.’

‘You are.’

‘Ohhhh, mm.’

‘My very good girl.’

‘Ohh, mmmmm.’

‘My very, very, good girl.’

‘Ohh, hehehe, ohhh.’

‘With the very red ass.’

‘Ohh-heheh-ohhh.’

‘Yes.’

‘Ohhhhhhh.’

‘My good girl.’

‘Ohh-heheheh. Don’t.’

‘Why?’

‘You know.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Heheheh. Don’t!’

‘Why?’

‘Because I laugh!’

‘So?’

‘You know!’

‘Good girl.’

‘Heheheh. Don’t!’

‘Why not?’

‘Because your dick sticks me! That’s why! You know that, when I laugh.’

‘Do you hear me complaining about your cunt sticking me?’

‘What? I-I—’

‘Well, do you?

‘I-ohh!—

‘I’m not complaining. You have a very sharp cunt. Did you know that?’

‘What!’

‘You do.’

‘I don’t! Don’t say that!’

‘Well stop sticking me with it.’

‘I’m not! You’re sticking me with your dick!’

‘No, you are.’

‘I’m not! It’s your dick!’

‘No, it’s your sharp pointed pussy.’

‘It’s not sharp! Don’t say that!’

‘Well, maybe it has fucking teeth, then.’

‘NO! Don’t! That’s awful!’

‘No, it’s sharp, and it’s sticking me right in the eye of my dick. Can’t you feel it, too?’

‘Yes! But it’s you! Your dick has the point! Not me! I’ve seen it, remember? Like a spear! And it’s sticking right up into me!’

‘Okay. You may be right after all.’

‘I am! It’s sharp! You have a sharp dick and that’s that!’

‘All the better to stick up inside your cunt for real then, isn’t it?’

‘Oh! No!’

‘Oh, yes. A sharp dick and a pointed pussy. A perfect match, I’d say.’

‘No! They’re not!’

‘They are, I think.’

‘No!’

‘Remember the rule.’

‘Ohh!’

‘Yes, the rule.’

‘Ohhhhh, god! The fucking rule!’

‘Yes, the rule.’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘Yes, the rule. What is it you have to remember all the time around me?’

‘Ohhh, Jesus.’

‘What?’

‘The-the rule.’

‘Yes, the rule.’

‘The rule.’

‘Yes, the rule.’

‘Yes, the rule.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Don’t.’

‘Why?’

‘You know.’

‘Why?’

‘You know.’

‘The rule.’

‘You cock’s got a point, that’s why.’

‘Yes, it does, doesn’t it?’

‘Yes, it does.’

‘Yes, it does. Why do you think it has?’

‘What? How would I know? It’s your dick, not mine.’

‘For sticking virgin’s with, that’s why.’

‘Ohh!’

‘Yes, for sticking virgins right in the fucking hymen to break it easily. That’s why it’s got a fucking point, and a sharp one, at that. Didn’t you know that? It’s so sharp it only needs one eye, too.’

‘Oh?’

‘Yes. The virgin spear-point.’

‘Oh!’

‘Yes, for sticking you.’

‘Oh!’

‘Yes, right in the cunt.’

‘Oh!’

‘Yep, right through your hymen.’

‘Oh!’

‘No more virgin.’

‘Oh!’

‘No more.’

‘Oh!’

‘Just a good little fuckable slave with a tight red hand-printed ass.’

‘Ohhh!’

‘And no more hymen.’

‘Oh!’

‘Finito.’

‘Ohhh.’

‘Finished.’

‘Ohhhh.’

Well and truly fucked.’

‘Ohhhhh.’

‘With a sharp point.’

‘Ohhhhh.’

‘Yep, you can run, but you can’t fucking hide from the point.’

‘Ohhhhh.’

‘From the spear.’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘With the sharp virgin-sticking point.’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘Can you?’

‘Ohhhhh.’

‘Can you, and remember the rule.’

‘Ohhh.......... No.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Don-ohhhhh.’

‘Good girl.

‘Ohhhhh.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Ohh-mmmm.’

‘My very good red-assed sharp cunt girl.’

‘Heheheheh. Don-ohhhh.’

‘Mmmmmm. Good girl.’

‘Heheheh. Sharp dick.’

‘Heheh. Yes, I have, haven’t Can you feel it?’

‘Yes. Heheheh. It’s sharp, that’s why.’

‘And why is it sharp?’

‘You know why.’

‘Why? And remember the rule.’

‘For-for sticking vir-for sticking hymens with.’

‘That’s right. And whose hymen do you think I’m going to stick next with that sharp point?’

‘Oh!’

‘Whose? And remember the rule.’

‘Ohhh............Mine.’

‘You got that fucking right.’

‘Oh!’

‘Yep.’

‘Ohhhhhh.’

‘Yours.’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘You want me to stick you with it.’

‘No! I don’t!’

‘The rule.’

‘I don—.........oh, god!’

‘The rule.’

‘I-I—....ohhh!..........Yes.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘Stick you?’

‘Ohhhh.’

The rule.’

‘Ohhh—’

‘The rule?’

‘Ohh—.......Yes.’

‘Say it.’

‘Ohhh. Sti-but I—’

‘The rule.’

‘Ohhhh, god! The fucking rule!’

‘Say it.’

‘Ohhh! .......Stic-but what abou—’

‘Say it.’

‘Oh! .........Sti—.....Stic—...... Oh, god!’

‘The rule.’

‘Jesus! The fucking rule! The fucking rule! Who makes up that fucking rule, anyway! Who!’

‘I do, your master, remember?’

‘Jesus!’

‘Say it.’

‘Stick me! Happy now? Stick me! Stick your sharp pointed dick into my sharp cunt and spear my hymen good! Okay? Stick it! Stick it! Spear me! Stick me! Fuck me! Dick me! Cock me! Just do it and be done with it! Shove it up my tight red ass for all I care about the fucking rule! Shove it up my nose if you like! Just fucking do it! Take my cherry! Spear the fucker to death! I don’t want it anymore, anyway! To tell you the truth, I’m fucking sick of it! Do it! Do it! Do it!’

(sobbing hysterically)

‘Are you finished?’

(Crying openly.)

‘Well? Are you?’

(weeping and shaking her head.)

‘Good girl. Finish now. We haven’t got all day.’

(Crying harder again and denying that she is a good girl after all)

‘Yes, you are.’

(Not crying as much, but shaking her head and denying that she is, even more strongly)

‘Okay, you’re not.’

(sniffing and shaking her head to agree.)

‘Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww!’

(howling like a banshee)

(wailing and rubbing her hot red ass)

(crying like a baby)

(rubbing her hot red ass)

(sobbing like a little girl)

(still rubbing her red hot ass)

(sniffing like a child that’s just had a good cry and feels better)

(still rubbing her red hot ass, but slower now)

(hardly sniffing at all now-all over bar the shouting)

‘Feel better now?’

(shaking her head)

‘What are you to me?’

(still shaking her had-hadn’t stopped, actually)

‘R... u... l... e.’

(no more shaking and only one petulant, but obviously defeated sniff)

‘Feel better now?’

(nods, barely)

‘What are you to me?’

(a deep sigh-a very deep sigh)

‘You-your ... good... girl.’

(another deep sigh of final admission and first serious submission)

‘Good girl.’

‘Ohhhhh.’

‘Yes, you are now.’

‘Ohhhh.’

‘Do you feel like you are?’

‘Ohhhhhh.’

(but nods her head)

‘Good girl.’

‘Ohhhh, mmmm.’

‘My very, very good girl.’

‘Ohhhh-heheheh-ohhh.’

‘Yes, you are.’

‘Ohhh, mmmmmm.’

‘Most of the time, anyway.’

‘Ohh-heheheh.’

‘Aren’t you?’

(nodding)

‘Good girl’

‘Heheheh.’

‘Yes, you are.’

‘Mmmmmm.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Heheheh. ...... Stop it.’

‘What?’

‘Sticking me.’

‘Heheheh.’

‘Heheheh.’

‘Good girl.’

‘Heheheh. Mmmmmmmmmm.’

‘I think it’s seriously time to fuck you now, don’t you? After all we’ve been through together?’

‘Oh!............ Ohh-mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!’

‘Good, fucking, girl!’

‘Heheheheh. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!’

‘Aren’t you.’

‘Yes. ......... I am.’

‘Yes, you fucking well are... now.’

‘Heheheheh. Yes... I am......now.’

‘Okay then. Get up, girl. Time to fuck.’

‘Ohhhhhh. Ughhh!’

‘Good girl.’

‘Hehehe-ohhhhh.’

(stands up, head bowed and rubs her red ass with both hands, then looks out beneath her eyebrows, shyly-coyly, even, but still rubbing her red ass)

‘You may... you may... deflower me, now.’

‘I may, may I?’

‘Yes. Heheheh. You may... with that’

‘With this?’

(Pulls his pants down and pulls back his foreskin all the way)

‘Oh! Yes. With your point.’

‘With my point?’

‘Yes, your point.’

‘With my sharp point?’

‘Yes. Heheh. With your sharp point.’

‘With my very sharp fucking master’s point?’

‘Heheheh. Yes. Very fucking sharp point.’

‘It’s pointing at you right now, you know.’

‘Heheheh. Yes, I know.’

‘It’s aiming, actually.’

‘Yes. Heheheh. It looks like it, too.’

‘Yes, right at your slave pussy.’

‘Yes. Heheheh. Right there.’

‘Yep. Right in your pretty hairy slit.’

‘Heheheh. Yes.... Right in my... right in my pretty slave cunt.’

‘Heheheheh. Good... fucking... girl! Turn around, bend over and grab your ankles.’

‘Oh!Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

The end