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The tropical South Pacific, 1990

How Jack and Becky had made it neither of them knew. They’d survived. And now, here, on the beach, soaked to the skin with the sun going down on this unknown island…

“Dad?” Becky said

“Yeah?”

“Should we start looking for… someone?”

“No, honey” he said

“Why?”

“It’s getting dark” he said “We best shelter here till sunup”

“Okay”

“And, you should get out of those wet clothes” he said as he undressed

“You’re kidding?”

“No… you’ll catch your death” he said as he got the fire going…. his emergency kit had a large thermal blanket that he began to unfold. He had the time to be impressed at just how small they’d packed it down to.

He set a small part down to sit upon and brought the rest up over his back

Becky got down to her undies

“No…everything” he said

“Really?”

“Yes, really” he said.

“Well… don’t look” she said

She drew off her bra. Her breasts were only 32B. He did look… and he thought about his late wife’s 36Ds. “Maybe she’ll grow further?” he thought to himself

Next came her wet panties

He saw the tattoo that she’d got on her thigh… an innocent teddy bear, still he did not approve of it.

Her sex was protected by her thick dark brown fur

She hung her bra and panties over a protruding branch and quickly skipped over to her dad as he held a part of the blanket open for her.

“Get in closer” he said and she did, pressing up against his side

He gave her that side of the blanket and she drew it around her and he then took it and closed it tighter

She had to admit they were both of them quite warm.

She leaned on his shoulder and despite all the ‘excitement’ of that day she soon was asleep.

He sighed knowing that at least she was out of it for the night. Sleep was what she needed.

In the morning she shimmied out of his embrace and was quick to put her panties on. Her bra however had fallen into the fire and half of it was destroyed

“Fuck” she said to herself as she held up the smouldering lace.

She heard her dad stirring and she grabbed her T-shirt and drew it on just as he woke

“Good morning, honey” he said

“Hi, dad” she said

“Can you hand me that tin?” he asked

“Sure” she said.

In it, secure from the saltwater were his charts.

“I’m just going to look for fresh water” she said

“Don’t go to far”

“I won’t”

“No… I mean it” he said “I don’t want you going behind sight of the beach”

“Okay” she said

Jack checked the map again. There shouldn’t be an island here. Thy were, by his reckoning -20.484864°S, -149.430978°W. This placed them somewhere between Tahiti (to the north) and Tubuai (south).

He went to move and the pain in his leg tore through him. It was excruciating.

Then he smelled it. “Fuck” he said to himself. That alone told him he was in a bad way.

They’d lost the med-kit and he’d had to wrapped his leg up tight in some large leaves and tied together with twine to make a very rudimentary bandage.

“Dad! Dad!” Becky came crying

He rose up as fast as he could wondering what was wrong when he bad leg gave out and he fell over

“Dad!” she came calling as she burst out of the jungle

“What is it?”

“Water”

“What?”

“I found water”

“Great, honey” he said as he struggled to his feet

“Dad?” she cried concerned “Are you alright?”

“Yes, honey” he lied.

“You sure?”

“Can you show me the way?” he asked

She turned and headed off….but stopped—realising he was not making the same degree of progress

She turned back and went to him “You sure you’re okay?”

“Just lead the way, honey” he said

He added “I’m really proud of you”

She grinned

They got to a clearing and there it was in a natural pool… water… but… it had a luminescent green hue to it…

“Take a look at this, Dad” she said…

And to his surprise he followed with his eyes as she moved up the side of the pool to a fountain … the water gushed out of the side of a rock

But… more remarkable was that someone or some people had carved an image out of the rock… that of a voluptuous woman… and the water… it tumbled out from her sex.

“It’s kinda perverted!” she said

“Remarkable” he said as he hobbled up to where his daughter was…it’s like he wanted a tactile confirmation of what his eyes were seeing

And he noticed too that despite the gush of water the pool was not over-flowing.

“Where do you suppose it all goes, dad?” she asked; observing the same thing he had

He looked at her and smiled, proud her enquiring mind had made the same observation

He ran his had roughly through her short boyish hair

“You’re a clever girl” he said

“I’ve got a good teacher” she said

He smiled again.

He’d home-schooled her and then out of … what was it… jealousy? He’d delayed her application to College.

Instead he’d convinced her to come on this trip… and now he had a wave of guilt… how this trip had turned out…

“Is this basalt?” she asked looking at the womanly carving

He leant past her to feel it when suddenly he lost his footing “Shit!” he cried as he tumbled into the pool

“Dad!” she gasped “Are you okay?”

“It burns!” he cried “Fuckkkkjj” as he reacted to the water… “Shit….”

She went to reach to get him

“No… don’t touch the water!” he cried as he made his way out of it himself

He hauled himself up out of it and then started tearing off his clothes in case he was injured by it… he half expected to feel his skin peeling or to find giant red welts like chemical burns….

But… he was okay… in fact he was able to stand upright properly on both legs

“Fuck” he gasped as he began picking at the makeshift dressing to look at his wound…

He opened it up… and to his shock the wound was a faded red line now…

“What the fuck?” he gasped

“Dad!” she gasped

“What?”

She pointed at his crotch

He looked down… his cock…it now hung over 12-inches long, and it was thick, and heavy

He also suddenly felt like all the other aches and pains were gone…

“Dad… you’re so… buff…” she said

He looked at his body and his small mid-age paunch was gone and his muscles were as well developed as when he was in his early 20s and doing weights

“What the fuck’s going on here dad?” she gasped

He looked back at the water

“Let’s get out of here…” he said

“I’m with you on that, dad” she said

He picked up his clothes and began to follow his daughter

He was able to keep pace this time…

But… also, as he followed he smelled something different… something… oddly familiar… and really quite nice…

He was embarrassed as he realised his cock was hard….

He was staring at his daughter’s ass as she moved briskly through the jungle

He…no… that was….

He turned and began masturbating and soon received himself by sending a huge dump of come onto some foliage

“Fuck!” he gasped at the amount he’d dropped

But… his cock was going down…

He caught up to his daughter as she sat down on the emergency blanket

He stood there, still naked

“Dad?” she gasped

“What?”

She pointed

“Oh, shit honey” he gasped and went to put his clothes on…

She laughed “You gave me such a scare back there”

“Sorry, baby”

“No… it’s okay, dad” she said “We’re just going to have to find some water somewhere else, I guess”

“What’s that?” he asked

“Where?” she gasped jumping up. She half expected he was pointing to a plane or boat

It was a large red plastic box, floating…

“What is it, dad?”

“That’s our emergency rations” he smiled

“Really?” she gasped “I’m starved…” she rushed down to the water and grabbed it. “It’s heavy”

He was close behind her

He picked it up… no… it was light as a feather…

She stopped and was shocked at how easy he carried it back to their ‘camp’

Still… they had a good meal… and water in long-life plastic pouches…. but still in the box there was only five litres each

He was able also to set up a proper fire and he had tarp for a lean-to

At least they now had a ‘roof’

As they worked he found himself looking again and again at his daughter. He was thinking of how beautiful she was, and he thought of seeing her naked earlier… when he got hard again

He was surprised and… shocked.

He rushed into the jungle and quickly gave himself relief . He couldn’t believe how much come he spilled, before going back

“Where’d you go, dad?”

“I just needed to… um… call of nature”

He wasn’t exactly lying

She just smiled, but she bent over to pick something up and he … God… he could smell her cunt….

He stepped towards her his cock growing hard again

“No!” he cried and rushed back into the jungle

“Dad?” she called after him

Having just come… to come again and so much… he couldn’t believe it.

None of this made sense

He found himself back at the pool looking at the goddess who poured fourth the waters

“Dad?” Becky called as she searched for him

She came through the jungle to find him there staring at the goddess

“Dad?” she asked brushing his shoulder “Are you okay?”

“I… I think I understand now” he said

“Understand what?”

“I… you know I love you?”

“I know”

“Do you love me too?

“Yes, of course dad”

“I… I want you to come with me..” he said turning and grabbing her arm

“Dad, what do you mean?”

“You have to be transformed too… you’ll understand”

“Dad… you’re… you’re hurting me”

“It will be so good… you’ll thank me” he said as he started pushing her towards the pool

“Please, dad” she cried “What are you doing?”

“I want you to be with me….” he said “There’s no other way…”

“Please dad… I’m scared”

He pushed her to the edge

“Please, dad” she cried

And then he pushed her into the pool

She was surprised as she fell back, and then… a huge splash

She cried out as she came to the surface…. the water burning her…

But her hair was long and sleek

“Here baby” he called offering his hand

She took it and he heaved her out as if she weighed nothing

“Are you… okay?” he asked as she doubled over and coughed some water out

“I…” she gasped

She stood up, her T-shirt rolled up by her protruding 38D breasts

She gasped looking at them

“You’re so fucking hot” he gasped looking at her

“Oh, dad” she gasped seeing his erection

“I…” he began not sure…“Are you… um.. okay?” he asked

“Let me” she gasped and she sank to her knees and kissed his cock

“I want this so bad” she gasped as she ran her mouth down the side of his shaft, kissing him

She sucked him and then… a moment later he exploded into her mouth

“Mm-mmm-mmm-mmmm” she gurgled as she swallowed a mammoth load of come as thick as custard

She held her mouth open to show she’d been a ‘naughty girl’ and taken it all down her gullet

“Fuck you’re hot” he said as she stood up

They embraced

“I want you in me, Daddy” she whimpered “I want your cock so bad”

He smiled, she’d not called him Daddy in such a long time and as her naked body pressed against his he felt he was goring firm again

Her left leg raised up and he slid his hand under her thigh and scooped her up “Oh, yesss” she sighed as she wrapped herself around him “Fuck me, Daddy”

“Oh, yeah” he grinned and pushed into her virginal hairless slit

She let out a little sigh as her hymen tore but it felt so warm- that feeling between her legs

Her clit throbbed as her father penetrated her. There had been an initial prick of pain but as her body opened up over him, swallowing him as a glove engulfs a hand she moaned appreciatively

“Fuck me, Daddy” she cried “Fuck your little girls hole”

He carried her back to the camp, her body gridding against him the whole time, unrelenting.

They stopped to come… both gasping in excited laughter as they came at the same time and he continued to carry her, still rock hard, and her body still wanting him more

“Fuck, Daddy” she cried “You’re so amazing”

“You like it?”

“God, yes” she laughed “I want you inside me all the time…”

“You’re amazing too, baby”

“Fuck me again, Daddy… please… it feels so good…”

They came again down on the sand, fucking like demented beasts.

They fucked three more times before finally sleep overwhelmed them

In the morning they were woken to see a man standing over them with a young woman

“You found the fountain then?” he asked

“Who… ? Who are you?” Jack sprung up, not realising he was naked

He noticed a small boat offshore, and an inflatable up on the beach

“I am Marcel Gaspard” the man gave a small bow “And this is my daughter Veronique”

“Hello” he said cautiously

“Monsieur” she bowed with a friendly smile

Becky sat up, now awake, She didn’t care she was naked.

“Oh, don’t worry” Marcel said embracing his daughter, he grabbed her breast and caressed it “We… we have tasted the waters too”

Jack only now realised he was naked

Marcel looked at them and smiled “Would you like to fuck my daughter?”

“Monsieur” she smiled, pulling off her dress “I would be happy to have you”

Jack looked at his own daughter

“Go ahead, Daddy” she smiled

He went to take Veronique’s hand… as if to walk away with her

“We do it here” she said unashamedly getting down on all fours. He realised he wanted her and it didn’t matter who watched… there was no sense of shame in him now.

He noticed Marcel now naked… and his cock loomed up as large as Jack’s

“Come, miss” Marcel said to Becky

“Alright” she grinned and sprung into his arms

Jack watched as his daughter took the man’s cock into her

He looked down to Veronique who was tugging on his hand “Please… fuck me…” she whimpered

She opened her hairless slit with her fingers… he gazed at her wet pinkness inside; she was wet and as she fingered herself it made a sloosh sound

He got down on her “Fuck me” she whimpered… he pushed into her and she moaned with pleasure on being penetrated

He found her to be as soft and warm as his own daughter… “Wow” she gasped “Your cock is so big…”

He smiled “Your cunt is so tight”

They kissed and he started driving up and down inside her

He didn’t even notice the screams of orgasm coming from Becky as Marcel fucked her

After coming twice he got up off Veronique as his daughter came over and they ate each other, lapping at the sperm in each other’s dripping pussies

“Fuck that’s amazing” Jack gasped

“Yes” he said “It’s the power of the fountain”

“The fountain?”

“Yes…you must realise it’s chagned you.. made you stronger and more virile…” he said “And your daughter… she’s horny for you now and you’ll find she’ll submit to you and be your bitch… it’s why we come back…” Marcel continued “You must come back every two years… and bathe again in its waters or you will lose your desires, powers, strengths…”

“Really?”

“It’s why my daughter and I are here…” he said “We’re addicted to it…”

“Can’t you just you know… bottle the water?”

“No… “Marcel sighed “We tried but we started to fade in strength… then my daughter… she realised what sin I was performing with her and she tried to go to the police… It was close”

“Really?”

“Yes” Marcel sighed “So, I kidnapped her and dragged her back here and threw her in the water and she changed back immediately”

“I threw my daughter in too”

They looked at each other and laughed

“Well…,” Marcel continued “Once the waters affected her again she wanted to rut like me like a rabbit again”

“You say she’s submissive”

“Yes” he said “Honey?”

“Yes, Papa?”

“Do you want to drink my piss”

“Oh, yes Papa… anything…” she gasped as he urinated on her. Her mouth hung open and instead of just taking it in she gulped it down

“See…?” Marcel said to Jack

“Wow” he gasped as Marcel pissed on the two girls.

Becky also lapped it down

“Say… “ Marcel said “How did you get here?”

“Daddy, please fuck me again” Becky whimpered, looking up, her face covered in Marcel’s sperm and piss

“It’s a long story” Jack said as he got down onto his hot daughter

Veronique whimpered and drew Marcel down to the ground and she mounted him.

The couples fucked each other a few more times. Marcel and his daughter then ran into the jungle to bathe in the waters and be rejuvenated

“You know what honey?” Jack said to his daughter as he looked at her ass

“What’s that, Daddy?”

“We’re going to have to come back in two years”

“Yes, Daddy” she said “I never want this to end”

“You… you like me fucking you?”

“Oh, Daddy” she laughed “Didn’t you notice… you’re an amazing fuck… and I so much want to please you…”

“Good girl” he said “Now… have you ever tried anal?”

“No, Daddy”

“Good… now’s the time”

“Yes, Daddy” she smiled not really knowing what to expect—a finger, a tongue, a cock…?

Jack was still humping his daughter’s ass when Marcel and Veronique emerged like they were extra buff. Veronique was quick to get down and lick at Jack’s ass as he butt-fucked his daughter and Marcel jerked off onto Becky’s eager tongue

They fucked, swapped positions, swapped daughters, did anal, etc. for an hour more. Finally the darkness washed over the island and Marcel and Veronique took Jack and Becky aboard there small boat

“We’ll show you how to find the island again” Marcel said as he took out a map and unrolled it across a table, as his daughter sucked his cock

Becky fingered her dad’s ass as he looked at the charts Marcel had laid out

Epilogue

They fucked non-stop over the days it took to get to Papeʻete. Once ashore they stayed at Marcel’s house and continued to fuck for days before Jack could finally set his mind to what to do next.

Jack and Becky decided to stay in the islands permanently

That way they could be close to the source…

They wanted to continue this new life they had found