The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

Bishoujo Land

An original story by NGMEZ

(Ch 3) Obedience by the Law

A month had passed, and Jake had almost completely readjusted to his new home. He sat on the couch in the guesthouse, watching a fighting competition between a huge wrestler and a giant panda, which was actually doing some very good back flips at the moment.

Jen walked in and sat on the couch. “Can’t we watch something else?

“No way! This is totally cool,” Jake watched the panda advance to the semi-finals, then turned to Jen. He had enjoyed her so much that he had hypnotized her into moving into the guesthouse with him. Oddly enough, he didn’t hypnotize her much since they had actually become friends. Well, except for when he didn’t feel like doing the dishes or he wanted to have some fun with her. (In real life, forcing a beautiful girl to do stuff would be lawsuit material. Here, they become your friend and move in with you. I’m not sure I’ll ever get used to this dimension)

The Professor and Barbara came in just then. “Great news, everyone!” the Professor exclaimed, “I’ve just signed up Jake for school.

“Um, Professor, is that wise? I mean, no one is supposed to know that’s he’s not from this dimension,” asked Jen.

“Sorry, but some people have noticed his living here. And it’s the law that everyone completes basic school. Afterwards, he can do whatever he wants

Jake shrugged. “Oh well, one more year won’t hurt anyway

“Actually, here you go through the fourteenth grade in school.

“What?!” Jake couldn’t believe it. (I was going to be a senior back home! Man, lost in another world, and punished with an extra two years of school) “Well, I suppose it won’t be so bad. At least I can learn more about this world.

Barbara nodded. “I made sure that all the arrangements are made. You are registered as Jake Mato, grandchild of Professor Mato, so you’ll be somewhat of a celebrity at school. Don’t worry, just be yourself and no one will suspect a thing.

Jake found himself up the next morning and walking the three blocks to school. He really didn’t mind, it was such a nice day. His teacher was a nice man, who went out of his way to make sure that Jake adjusted to the school well. Sure as Barbara had predicted, everyone wanted to know about his ‘grandfather’, the great Professor Mato. Jake had actually gotten to know the old man pretty well, so was able to fairly accurately answer most everything they threw at him. During the athletic period, he even played baseball with some new friends and had a great time.

But what Jake noticed the most about school were the people. There were so many different types it was astounding. Especially the females. From teacher to student, everyone was drop dead beautiful. (I’ve died and gone to heaven. That’s the only explanation) So many different and exotic girls to choose from, every one he could stare at all day. (Man, the guys in the club back home would kill to just see this place. And then they’d pay to have one of these vixens hypnotized to be their slaves) And that was the best part of all, Jake knew that he could hypnotize any of them. Even those with the strongest will power would succumb to his abilities. He had practiced on Jen for the past month, and was now much better with his skills. He’d mainly limited himself to Barbara and the genie since the Professor wanted to run tests, and he had been more interested in fitting in and learning about his new home. Now he was ready to have some more hypnotic mind slaves. (Too bad none of these girls can move in with me like Jen)

The day finally ended, and Jake said goodbye to his new friends. He was about halfway home when a sports car pulled alongside him and honked. Jake looked and was astonished at who was behind the wheel.

“Jake! Hello,” Jen said. Her car was a cool blue color, matching the driving gloves she was wearing. She had sunglasses on top of her head, but other than that she was wearing the same genie clothes she was always in. “You look great in your school uniform

“Jen? Where did you get the car?

“Easy, genies can make whatever they want. Why do you think I never had to go to a job?

“I never really thought about that.

“Come on, hop in!

Jake walked around to the passenger door and climbed in. “Can you drive this thing?

“Sure, can’t you drive yet?

“Yeah, but

“It’ll be fine. Come on, I’ll sure you around town new guy.” With that she put the car in gear and started driving.

“This is nice,” Jake said as the car glided down the road.

“Yes, it’s very beautiful. You need to buckle up by the way

“Sorry, I forgot,” Jake buckled himself up. “There we go

“Alright, lets have some fun now,” and with that Jen stomped on the gas.

Jake was thrown back against his seat as Jen began weaving in and out of the much slower traffic on the streets. “What in the name of sanity are you doing?!” Jake looked at the speedometer. It was measuring speed in some kind of length that his dimension didn’t have, but since it was up to triple digits he figured she was speeding greatly. “You’re going to hurt someone! Slow down Jen!

“No I won’t. Genie reflexes are much better than most peoples are. Besides, all of these guys drive so slowly, and all the good sights are on the other side of town. It’ll be much faster to get there like this

Jake alternated between yelling and begging as he tried to get Jen to slow down in vain. The girl was completely calm and although they came close to hitting others, she never seemed concerned in the least. This continued for a frightening six minutes until a police cruiser somehow managed to get behind them long enough for it’s siren to attract Jen’s attention. “Great, what did I do?” She finally pulled over on the highway, which Jake didn’t even remember getting on, as the police stopped behind them. Jake realized he had been holding his breath and started gasping for air. Glancing in the rear view mirror, Jen noticed the single figure in the car get out and started to walk over. “Why do the police always pick on law abiding citizens like me?

“Are you nuts? Jen, you have no idea how glad I am that officer was able to pull you over!

“What? Hey, whose side are you on anyway? What was I doing wrong? If people want to drive slowly, they should do it on side streets and leave the main ones to people who actually have places to be

Jake stared at his friend in disbelief. “Jen, if I had thought that there was any way to hypnotize you so that we wouldn’t have crashed while you were driving, then I would have. You went ballistic out there!

“You are no fun Jake.” Jen rolled down her window as the officer approached. Jake just hung his head as the officer stepped up to the window. Jen spoke, “Officer, how may I help you?

“Identification please,” said a pleasant female voice.

“Sure,” Jen handed over a card identical to Jakes’.

“Citizen Jen, genie class. Do you have any idea how fast you were going thru half of the eastern blocks?

“Look, just because the others in this town don’t know how to drive is no reason to punish me. Why don’t you pull some of them over and…hey! I’m not through yet!” The officer had started to walk around the car to Jake’s window. She tapped on it and he rolled it down

“Identification please

“Sure,” Jake pulled out his ID and handed it to the woman, looking at her for the first time. And his mouth dropped open.

She had an incredible body, which filled out her button down police shirt and skirt nicely. YPD was on both shoulders of her uniform, along with her badge over her heart, and a police hat on her head. Her green hair was tied back in a ponytail, much shorter than Jen’s, though it probably came down to her shoulders. She had red eyes that were very soft, but they were not her most unique features. THAT would have to be what her ears were. They looked like metallic blades, telling him that she definitely wasn’t human. But still, gorgeous. (She’s so beautiful) Jake was still constantly amazed with how beautiful the girls in this dimension were.

“Jake Mato, human class. Mato?” The officer looked thoughtful for a second then tapped her right ear. Both ears then began projecting a screen in front of her face. Jake couldn’t read the words since they were backwards but saw pictures of himself and the Professor flash onscreen. “Ah, you are related to Professor Mato. He’s a very good citizen. Except for when he released those mutants on the mall during opening day. But that was a perfectly honest mistake.” The cop hesitated. “At least, that’s what he told us. With scientists you can never be too sure, they’re always pushing the boundaries.

Jake nodded to the beauty. “Yep, that sounds like good old gramps.

“Well, regardless, I have to write your friend up. She was going nearly seventy units faster than legally permitted.

Jen looked mad. “Hey! I told you, if people knew how to drive, we wouldn’t have this sort of problem

“Actually, I’m perfectly fine with this officer,” Jake whispered as his friend continued ranting.

“I’ll be right back. Please don’t run, I don’t want to have to call in air support to shoot your tires out like the last ones I pulled over,” the woman made her way back to her car. At the mention of running, Jen actually seemed to be considering it.

“Jen, I’ll never forgive you if you run,” Jake warned.

“I wasn’t going to! Great, insurance is high enough without a ticket. For some reason, they think I’m an ‘extreme risk’ on the road.” Jen looked back at the cruiser in disgust. Suddenly, her face lit up. She turned to Jake and began giving him a look he knew all too well. It meant she wanted something.

“What?” he asked.

“Jake, please, hypnotize her into not giving me a ticket

“No way! Do you realize how many people you almost ran over?

“For the last time! I never came close to hitting anyone

“Tell that to the old man who had to dive into the fruit stand

“Look, stop changing the subject. Come on, you want beauties serving you. She’s cute. Just zap her, and make sure I don’t get ticketed.

“She’s not even human!

“Hello! You didn’t have that problem with me

“I mean she’s not a person. She’s a robot.

“Android

“Um, what’s the difference?

“An android is a person who’s gone under cybernetic enhancements to gain more power. It’s becoming a little more common in some professions

“Why would a person do that?

“She was either in an accident and required it to live, or she chose to do it for some reason

“Oh, so she’s still human?” Jake looked at her again. (She’s so beautiful)

“See? It’s all right. And besides, I think you deserve to have any girl you want

“You just don’t want a ticket.

“What I want isn’t important right now! Come on, why do I have to insist for a guy your age to mesmerize a hottie and have your way with her?

“Okay fine, I’ll do it

“Thank you so much!

Jake reached into his pocket, and then groaned. “I forgot, I left both the gem and noteputer at home.

“What! Why the heck would you make a bonehead move like that?

Jake looked annoyed. “Hey, I didn’t want to be tempted to use hypnosis on my first few days at school, so I left the stuff that would help me behind. Is that wrong?

“Yes! Because now I’m going to be ticketed! Oh! Use the love spell on her. That’ll make her do whatever you want

“I have to touch the subject to project into her mind like that. Unless she’s asleep, it makes it much easier then, but she doesn’t look like she needs a nap

“So you do that

“Touching an officer while your being investigated is a bad thing here. I learned that from Barbara.

“Oh, yeah, there is a good chance she’d rip off the door and throw you half a block before she went under. So is there nothing you can do?” Jen noticed the cop coming back in the rearview mirror. “Aww, nuts

“Well, there are certain techniques that don’t require any induction tool or physical contact. But I’ve never really used them on anyone but you or Barb, so I’m not sure how it would work on an officer. She’s probably trained to have an extremely high resistance level to this kind of stuff

“Come on, try for me. Please.

“Fine, but if I go to jail, you explain it to Barbara and the Prof.

The officer bent down again at Jake’s window and handed him back his ID. “Sir, please enjoy Yoto City while you live here with your grandfather.” She looked at Jen. “Ma’am, I’ve fined you two hundred credits. You should obey the law and be a better example to an impressionable seventeen-year-old boy.

“Two hundred! Listen here you,

“That’ll be fine officer,” Jake interrupted. Jen kept complaining, but no one paid any attention to her. “I’m really sorry for Jen, she just doesn’t know any better,” Jake spoke as he stared into her red eyes.

“It’s alright sir, just be more careful driving in the future

“I will, I promise,” Jake said. His eyes began to give off a slight glow. As the officer stared, his glowing pupils became very small. Suddenly, his eyes began glowing very brightly. The cop was unable to look away, his eyes were piercing and she couldn’t move. “Relax, officer. Look deep into my eyes,” Like a beautiful doe caught in headlights, she couldn’t move. She began to feel dreamy, as if nothing was really happening to her. Everything was wonderful, and the boy’s flashing eyes made her feel so good. Her arms went limp as she stared, her eyes slowly closing halfway as she fell deeper under his thrall. Finally, the light died, and Jake saw the woman was dazed. Her eyes were only halfway open and she swayed slightly from side to side as she stood there entranced. “Hello officer, I was wondering if you wouldn’t mind forgetting about Jen’s ticket for me

“Yes, forget about the ticket…” the dazed cop repeated in her trance.

“You love obeying all commands

“Obey all commands…

Jen spoke up, having witnessed the woman’s free will being erased by Jake’s mesmerizing stare. “And, you want to be more understanding of people in a hurry and not give them such high tickets

“More understanding of people and not give them tickets…

Jake glance at Jen. “Would you leave this to me?

“What! She deserves it!

“Whatever,” Jake turned his attention back to the cop, who had been standing oblivious to the exchange. “You will follow us home so that you can obey me more

The woman stood up and began walking back to her car. Jake could still hear her. “Follow you home and obey more…

Jen clapped her hands, “Well, we didn’t see any sights, but thank you so much!

“Right, well, let’s get home

“Right

“And drive safely this time

“What, are you kidding? With a police escort, I can go as fast as I want!

“Jen! The cop will be behind us, and I didn’t do that so you could drive dangerously whenever you wanted to

“It’s NOT dangerous. And just go and tell her to escort us back home

“Have you heard anything yet?

“Look, it’s not my fault people don’t know how to drive. She pulled me over just to fill her quota and…” Jen glanced at Jake while she was arguing. She noticed that his eyes were shining brightly. It was so beautiful to look at, she couldn’t help but stare. The light intensified as she sat transfixed. Jen’s body relaxed, with one hand falling off the steering wheel while she leaned back. She felt dreamy, so pleasant that she moaned and let herself fall into his eyes.

When Jake stopped using his powers, Jen had the same dazed and peaceful expression on her face. “Sorry Jen. But I want you to drive home while obeying the laws.

“Drive home and obey the laws…” Jen turned the engine on again. She felt so wonderful that she would do anything anyone told her. Nothing was wrong, as long as she obeyed Jake she would always feel this good.

Both cars pulled up into the driveway and all three got out. Jake had two beauties hypnotized in front of him. “Officer, what’s your name?

“Sarah…

“Sarah, I want to know how old you are

“Twenty-eight…

Over a decade older than him. (Still, in the shows the guy always has a chance with the hot females no matter what the age difference) “Perfect.” Sarah was totally at his command, she would obey whatever he wanted. “Oops, almost forgot. Hey Jen, wake up

Jen blinked as she came out of her trance. She shook the cobwebs from her head and looked around. “Hey, how did we…oh, I remember now.

“Sorry. Can you tell me how it felt? I need to make notes for the Prof.

“Everything was incredible. It was like a dream, and for some reason your voice was the most incredible sound I’d ever heard. I just had to obey, everything was so dreamy. I might have to let you do that more.” Jen walked over to Sarah, “You should apologize for bothering me

“I’m sorry…

“Jen!” Jake said, “Would you cut that out?

“What? I deserve it. Let’s make her walk downtown naked. That’ll teach her to overexert authority

“No way

“Why not?

“Because I like her. Sarah, follow me,” Jake walked into the guest house

“Follow you…” Sarah walked obediently after her new master

Jake led her to the living room and sat on the couch, Sarah standing before him. “You will obey everything that I tell you

“Obey everything you tell me…

“Well, let’s see if the enhanced human is still human. Strip to you underwear

Sarah’s hands reached up and began to unbutton her shirt, “Strip to underwear…

Jen walked into the lab to see the Professor and Barbara working at a computer. “Hi, guys!

Professor turned around, “It’s my favorite genie! Did you meet up with Jake?

“Yeah, but he’s busy. Some cop tried to ticket me, but he’s redefining her definition of speeding for me right now.

“That boy was the perfect choice! I’m such a genius!

Barbara shook her head, “He really shouldn’t mess with the authorities like that

“Nonsense, the boy is perfect!

Jen agreed, “Besides, she was being a real jerk. I wasn’t speeding too much, and she wanted some huge fine.

Barbara was unconvinced. “But still,

The Professor went back to his screen. “Barb, I’ll hear none of that. Now leave it alone and get back to helping me

“Yes, Prof.” Barbara was forced to agree. She sighed. Jake’s hypnotic powers still affected her, forcing her to do anything the Professor told her. She’d been unable to resist anything he asked her, and she was tired of it. She vowed that once she had Jake deprogram her, she’d let the old man really have it.

Sarah’s only physical clue that she was an android were the earblades. She stood before him, wearing only her bra, panties, and one other piece of clothing. “Um, Sarah,” Jake asked, “How on earth do you run after criminals in heels?

“I’m trained to…” Sarah had let her green hair down, and it now framed her beautiful face as well as descending slightly passed her shoulders. Jake had noticed that a lot of girls here seemed to have extremely long hair.

“Now Sarah, from today forward, your top priority is to serve me.

“Yes…” Sarah reached up and touched her right ear, making the holographic screen appear again. She scrolled to ‘Duties’ and forced everything down one number. Under number one, she inputted ‘Serve Jake’. “My top priority is to serve you…

“Come hear officer, it’s time to serve.” Sarah walked over and stood in front of Jake. He pulled her down to straddle him and gave her a long kiss. She responded, being hypnotized not diminishing her passions in the least. He slowly lowered the helpless babe on her back on the couch. “You will enjoy this so much, Sarah

“I will enjoy this…

The next day, Jen was walking home with a huge bag of groceries. She was going to make Jake his favorite dinner to thank him for her help. She walked into their house. “I’m home!” She stood confused, as Jake, Barbara, Sarah, and the Professor were all standing in the living room wearing old clothes. There were some boxes and furniture in the foyer, and they appeared to be moving them upstairs. “What’s going on?

The Professor was ecstatic. “Great news! Sarah’s moving in here! Now there are two babes!

“What?!

Jake shrugged, “Well why not?

“I…

Sarah shrugged. “I don’t know why, but after meeting Jake yesterday, I felt that I couldn’t go back to my lonely apartment. And he said you guys have tons of extra room, so when I asked if I could move in he said yes

Jen dropped her bag and her mouth hit the floor. “Jake…did…what?

Sarah picked up a full dresser with ease and began carrying it up the stairs. “We’re almost done now

Professor looked at her happily. “Such a beauty! Pulling Jake from his dimension was the best accident in my lab! I’m being surrounded by beautiful women!” He picked a box and eagerly followed Sarah, staring at her nice rear. “Come to think of it, Jake is the only GOOD accident to ever happen in the lab

Jen stormed over to Jake “What did you do?! I thought you were just going to have a little fun!

Jake shrunk back from her rage. “She’s a really good person. And she really was feeling lonely, she’s obsessed with this one criminal, which is why she got the enhancements. I thought it would be better for her to live with friends. It really didn’t take too much to convince her

“Jake, I’m going to kill you!

Jake suddenly pointed behind her. “Whoa, what is that?

As Jen turned around, Jake took off down the hall as fast as he could. “Jake! Come back here and take it like a man!” she yelled as she chased after him

Barbara just picked up a box and sighed. “I don’t understand these nuts, I just work here.”

(End Ch 3)